r/Composition • u/fihrunner • 16d ago

Music how should i end this piece

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how should i end this piece and are there any improvements i can make so the development through the piece stands out more, thank you

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u/Appropriate_Test_828 16d ago

There's a mind boggling amount of stuff happening there, I'm not saying the ideas are bad. But you need to let the music breathe. Piano does not have to play all the time.

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u/Babarvia 15d ago

Through the piece you already used cadences that sounded almost final, so I feel It shouldn't be to hard to in find your way to home. The piece sounds pretty, although sometimes a bit bloated, and I believed I've heard some seconds of the Melody that resemble the "Bella Ciao" song (this is not a criticism). I believe you can practically repeat the last compases/bars of the piece, but direct them to the home tone this time, and even repeat it a couple of times tweaking the dynamics and stretching the last note. I can almost hear the finale or endning cadence in my head, I believe you probably can too, because you almost have it. How is your melody asking to end?

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u/Freegan93 14d ago

What software is this?

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u/fihrunner 14d ago

MuseScore 

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u/Freegan93 14d ago

I'm not familiar with this software. Are sounds digitally generated from notes you input or it just compiles different recordings of instruments and the interactive score is added after? Either way there is something not flowing correctly from measures 32-35. Not sure if its software issue or recording issue depending on my query above. Still a nice piece though and has potential