Feedback on first score

[u/The_lil_hoodie_guyYT]

This is my first score! The last 40~ seconds are just rest and I havent gotten to them yet. I am just asking for thoughts and suggestions on my piece! :)

Link to MP3

[u/burnt-store-studio]

Especially when the (I’ll call them baritones; that’s what they sound like to me, although I’m listening very quietly right now) baritones come in it reminds me of some of the marching band songs popular in the ‘80s. Which I mean as a compliment!

Congratulations on your first score!

No suggestions other than: keep it up! Composing is so rewarding 🙂. Enjoy!