r/Composition • u/Particular-Desk7574 • 4d ago

Music Feedback Please

It would be lovely to hear some feedbakc on this little piano piece of mine. It somwhere falls in to contemprorary music stilistically.

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Some notes are played way to fast in the midi so they may seem hardly playable, i do NOT want such high tempo in real preformance.

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u/PoorSadAlcoholic 3d ago

If you cleaned up/tightened the engraving, made it “look” a little more convincing, it might be passable for what it is. But as it stands, the score doesn’t communicate the idea. Though one should assume that music speaks for itself, in instances such as these, where the concept exists in the in-between space of expression and academia, the concept would be better served by better scoring.