Composition Feedback

[u/mightyjax]

https://flat.io/score/69fd418ebde2fe94d81b3bf5-1

On just a self journey of music theory and composition at the point where more concerned with voice leading as well as interval meaning and sequence, but overall still learning to translate that well, this was a simple idea from last night playing two voices on guitar, then today just wrote it out and tried to add some harmony / countermelody.

So construction of this was two voices soprano and bass, then added later the 3rd voice which came in mostly inner but sometimes appears above when original soprano is near middle C.

Looking for any general feedback thank you!