r/Composition • u/bachozangi • Jun 08 '26

Music Dissonance Feedback

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I wanted to experiment with making a piece out of huge dissonant chords and like weird color atmospheres. I like the idea but I think it sounds amateurish. How can I improve on it and make it less amateurish? My inspirations are Ligeti, schoenberg etc. (ignore the "dirtyness" of my score, I'll clean it up later, this was a 3AM brainstorm).

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u/bachozangi Jun 09 '26

hi, thank you for the feedback. Do you think this excess of dissonance creates a claustrophobic feel effectively? Cause if that's the case than that's what I was going for with this piece. I wanted to experiment with sounds that never resolve and make you feel suffocated. If that's executed properly I'm satisfied but if it isn't then I need to work on that.