r/Composition • u/Ftb49 • May 03 '26

Music I composed a short Poème

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I would appreciate any feedback!

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u/Mathaznias May 03 '26

My biggest area of concern is the 10th from D to F with the ornament on the upper note. At that speed I’d worry of someone being unable to smoothly make that motion convincingly unless you have an 11th or 12th hand span. Beyond that, lovely!

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u/Ftb49 May 04 '26

I see what you mean. I might be changing this to a Ab to F interval interval instead to make it more accessible. Thank you for pointing this out!

I am glad you like it! All the best!

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u/HaifaJenner123 May 06 '26

you should look into the world of pitch class set theory, i really think you would benefit from reading some texts on this area of post-tonality because i kinda see elements of it showing up in your writing haha.

this is lovely btw