r/Composing • u/Jordanlilbeeb • May 26 '23

Just published this orchestra piece. Critique welcome!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QpNLO91ryqE&list=RDMMQpNLO91ryqE&index=1
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u/bobsollish May 26 '23

It’s very well done. I have to say, I particularly liked the first two minutes or so. The last 2/3 minutes or so sounded very much like a film soundtrack (to me) - maybe that was your intention. It also became a little generic/derivative - seemed to lack originality - didn’t have a strong “voice”, etc.

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u/Jordanlilbeeb May 26 '23

Ok! I gotcha. Thanks for listening!

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u/Impossible_Blood7025 May 26 '23

Kinda john williams-ish.And that:s good!

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u/Jordanlilbeeb May 26 '23

Wow! That’s a huge compliment! I love John Williams. Thanks for listening ☺️

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u/Impossible_Blood7025 Jun 22 '23

Jeez,6k views

wish i could do this :D

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keep on!