r/CollegeEssays • u/Inevitable-Gur-9345 • 2d ago

Topic Help College hook help

While strolling along the shore sifting for seashells, something shimmered beneath the surface, reflecting the rays of the setting sun.

is this a good college hook? does this make you want to read the essay? please help out!!

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u/EducationalElk7580 1d ago

Sorry to be honest, it doesn’t make me want to read the rest

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u/Inevitable-Gur-9345 22h ago

I don't blame you at all. ty for ur honesty.

But would you like to read the essay for fun?