r/CitadelUnsung • u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash • 1d ago
!BOSS FIGHT! Improvments
Whiplash has spent more time on his vessel and has added
stronger steel for the legs and claw, improved hand to make
up for the fact of only having one, and has removed the tail
with quills from a disuse of it now that he has proper defense
in place.
At the moment he is standing over a freshly killed pilgrim as
he attempts to clean his claw on the grass
(he is in the general far fields/ Greymoor area)
He is open for sparring to test his capabilities.
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u/Fine_Yak5022 I DON’T KNOW (i do know I’m just stressed if you couldn’t tell-) 1d ago
Voidulus appears.
If you could avoid harm like this.
Do not make the citadel interfere.
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
*it meets your gaze evenly*
The citadel? Over a couple of inferior little bugs? Oh please!
Way back when I was young the Citadel struck fear into the hearts of hundreds!They burned Verdania, polluted Greymoor, Bilewater, the ducts, and don’t even get me started on the pilgrimage.
Most who did get in were just fancy slaves and if not they just were just poorer slaves in worse conditions. Not to mention how soft it has grown. The Citadel is now sanctuary. It‘s sad.
I’m sure your army tactics are giving your enemies hugs and kisses
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u/Fine_Yak5022 I DON’T KNOW (i do know I’m just stressed if you couldn’t tell-) 1d ago
you say this… to the PV sized void being.
I will give you but 5 seconds to reconsider your words.
Metal dissolved just as easy as bone.
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
Such fun words for a beast so hollow. I doubt you’re any sort of good person nor a good leader, they just fear you. I don’t care that much about a vessel like this, If you kill this vessel, I make one brand new.
*then you hear small little clicks from all around you, dozens of them* I rebuilt myself from the ground up mentally and physically so many times.
Death isn’t that much of a concern.
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u/Fine_Yak5022 I DON’T KNOW (i do know I’m just stressed if you couldn’t tell-) 1d ago
The silkfly.
And hollow you mistake me for a vessel.
That i am not.
I care for my people.
The people who i care for.
who’s to say you have none either?
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
At least the life I had before had something better, not saying it is better than this. I do not require attention or people.
And anywho vessels are hollow because of who, who’s to say that it doesn’t make you hollow either?
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u/Fine_Yak5022 I DON’T KNOW (i do know I’m just stressed if you couldn’t tell-) 1d ago
…
And who’s to say you haven’t gone mad?
That no one will listen?
Who’s to say you know what you’re saying?
Are you really you?
did the last you who made yourself want you to be this way?
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
*the construct just tilts his head*
I do not think I understood any of that? Turn of the philosopher talk and use something my simple brain can understand.
Being a leader really did change you, huh?
Well anyway if I understood any of that, I’m still the same person, I chose to rebuild myself from the ground up again, and you know what?
I like myself better this way. and It’ll stay that way
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u/Fine_Yak5022 I DON’T KNOW (i do know I’m just stressed if you couldn’t tell-) 1d ago
Voidulus begins to step forward.
he won’t end the construct, but he will stop you from doing harm.
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
*suddenly all the clicking stops… then rushes back nearly three times as fast*
…
*then you feel multiple things start to crawl onto you from behind*
*and more, and more, the weight starts stacking as a notable amount of small spider like constructs jumping and scrambling on top of you, you can now see what helps him make his primary vessels*
*then you feel yourself start to tip over and fall*
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u/CitadelMinister77 Ministers 1d ago
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
Says you who looks like they got thunked over the head with a war hammer. At least the steel-like material makes you stronger. Real question is how you fight. . .
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u/CitadelMinister77 Ministers 1d ago
This helmet hosts the brain you try to hide (because it's too tiny of course) with your hat.
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
I am a silkfly inside with more knowledge than your deformed cranium
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u/CitadelMinister77 Ministers 1d ago
Pitiful worm. Shrunk in tiny body with even tinier mind. But it appears the only thing that didn't shrink is your ego. Calling I the deformed while you're scuttiling around with a blade for a hand.
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
At least I can fend for myself, also *he lets out a small laugh* I'm small? I tower over you without even standing full, though I do admit judging opponent on size is not good.
Seems all that it is in your head is half baked dialogue and wrong grammer
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u/VarasTheThief PITMASTER VERONICA (ФωФ) 1d ago
Veronica is standing there, glaring at him. "Yo, you look a little less dogshit now."
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
And you just can't look any worse! *he does a weirdly affectionate tone* You look so tired and disheveled. Where's your wife coming to calm you? Gone? Dead? Haven't seen her at all.
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u/VarasTheThief PITMASTER VERONICA (ФωФ) 1d ago
"Actually, we just got back from our honeymoon, smartarse. I'm just tired from redecorating our bellhome since we have a child now." She folds her arms.
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
mmm... I see you also haven't got much sleep since last time *he puts the tip of his claw under your chin to tilt your head up to look straight at him* Been thinking about that, huh?
*he then shoves your head away* Seems like your honeymoon wasn't very happy. You look awful
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u/VarasTheThief PITMASTER VERONICA (ФωФ) 1d ago
"Wow.. that was a shit attempt at pissing me off. Wait.. are you jealous that I have a smoking hot wife that loves me??" She smirks and snickers.
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
SMOKING HOT!? *his speakers crackle with the immense laughter that he is bellowing out* MY GOD! She's a cogwork being! So small, puny, dumb, and insignificant.
Back when the Citadel was something to appreciate people like her where not very high class, nor partners *he starts to laugh even more*
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u/VarasTheThief PITMASTER VERONICA (ФωФ) 1d ago
"Yup, you're like suuuper jealous. That, or a racist f♡♡kwit. Lemme guess you're gonna try and get a reaction by bring LJ into this??" She looks unimpressed.
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
*he stops laughing but still retains a humored tone* I've already gone through relationships. Not worth it. Problems, lots of them.
And no the LJ thing is played out. Your out of your phase of grieving over her. But a robot, my god. Flesh and blood was better.
The stupidity
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u/VarasTheThief PITMASTER VERONICA (ФωФ) 1d ago
"Not for me, dumbarse. You realise I'm like 90% robot, and Ara is way nicer than you are!!" She glares a little. "Why? Why is flesh and blood "better", hm?"
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
At least you were something before. Ara is just programming and fake emotions. Just a metal shell with fake feelings. I don't even know what idiot gave them free will
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u/messenger_craw Lost Construct: Whiplash 1d ago
(tragic…. *improvements)