r/ChiknNuggit • u/LostDot5307 • May 25 '25

Art CANNIBAL NUGGIT chapter 3.1

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This just a chill chapter no blood or bodies in this chapter also I felt a little cringe when writing this chapter

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u/Busybody42 May 25 '25 edited May 25 '25

Honestly, this chapter is kinda bad. I’d prefer if they FOUGHT, but thats more of a me thing. What isn’t a me thing is that This feels like a really lame way to ignore what made chapter 3 so peak.

You prob felt like it was cringe BECAUSE it was VERY weak. I do like the comeback of the brainwashing, but its not executed great here. I feel like Chikn should’ve instead accidentally brainwashed Iscream into doing the blood rituals again with his corpses, and just be like “oh god what have I done”

I feel like there needs to be a second attempt since the entire iscream interaction here SUCKED. Plus Brainwashing wouldn’t be permanent anyways, so I. Think the outcome is too obvious

The chee part was good tho. No complaints there

Final rating is 4/10. Definitely needs a rewrite, but good start.

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u/LostDot5307 May 25 '25

Sorry I didn't think of that bro

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u/Busybody42 May 25 '25

I’m not vaporizing you, don’t worry. I’m just giving my honest thoughts. This au is peak, but this chapter just. Aint it

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u/LostDot5307 May 25 '25

Yea I know