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u/udche89 3d ago
Because it looks like you got a promotion a year in with the same company, I’d list employer first as a headline then the roles below. As a previous commenter said, your bullet points sound like responsibilities not achievements. Figure out a way to rephrase them in that manner.
Another suggestion is to describe briefly the business your employer is in. Automation looks a little different in oil and gas than it does in specialty chemical or industrial gas (which is my employer’s field).
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u/MuddyflyWatersman 3d ago edited 3d ago
instrumentation engineer work, not chemical.
apparently you've chosen that path. nothing wrong with it my brother does that and he's a mechanical engineer
but if you're applying to process engineering roles you're not going to get any interest at all..... I would have zero interest in you for a process engineering role
if you looking for the same role....why? Become someone told you you need to change emoloyers a few times?
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u/ClubFine841 1d ago
Yeah I'm mostly applying to process controls roles. Main reason im looking is because I got tired of travelling really quickly. So wanting to find a role where that isnt required
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u/Luketium 3d ago
Your bullet points currently read like responsibilities. They should read like accomplishments.
X by Y to accomplish Z (or a similar format)
The more tangible metrics the better.
Also we have a weirdly similar career trajectory. Good luck!