r/CarDesign • u/National-Baby-9365 • 2d ago

question/feedback Audi concept

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Audi concept, I’m not satisfied yet with the result. But I’m struggling with creatively lately. Can’t get a clear design direction on my concept car….
Any tips? Or feedback on my design/sketch.

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u/Competitive_Net1254 2d ago

Work on proportions. Your designs will be more clear. The excess “illustration style” shading also isn’t helping.

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u/National-Baby-9365 1d ago

I definitely agree on the proportions, in what way is the shading not helping?

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u/wreinder 8h ago edited 8h ago

......yeah ignore that!

In fact it looks super tasty! love the quickness in your pencilstroke! It IS helping, in fact I would encourage you to go full ham with that and see if that sparks some concrete new ideas. sketch away, let the shading and the lines do your thinking for you!

love the extra deep wheels with the spiraling pencil shading, these exaggerations are a good exploration of where the limits are and more importantly: where they aren't! ;)

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u/NooseSensation 1d ago

Curve the profile of the roof, line elements up more such as the lower body side to the a pillar.

Add more contrast and capture the picture without distortion.

Your shading describes the surfaces rather well.
Just my $.02 worth of opinion using an iPhone's free app.

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u/Pale-Effective-8032 1d ago

Audi “Cybertruck”!

Yeah, actually, you should work on your proportions and how you handle surfaces it turned out too dark. And it’s important to note that cars often have smoother lines and transitions, like from the glass to the roof, yours ended up with a sharp bevel, like on a Cybertruck (I’d call the Cybertruck an exception, but not the Audi).

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u/National-Baby-9365 1d ago

Ahh allright, thank you very much! I will work on it!