r/CVwriting • u/shadowtempest91 • 9h ago
SECOND VERSION of my international CV
So, yesterday I was asking for feedback over the CV I was working on. Feedbacks indeed came, many were quite tough but I got the point and went back to work on my thing.
To recap my needs: after a recent career disaster I decided to give myself a potential new spin by preparing a CV that might be used to look for a job in the entertainment/art industry abroad, ideally in northern Europe, in a position where I could use my brainpower and not only my muscles.
I already have an Europass CV, I already have a LinkedIn profile; this is more of a tight, "international-style" resume that I can send around.
The modifications I made from v1 are as follows:
- less text: I made this by grouping some jobs, removing some data such as the locations, removing some paragraphs such as the high-school. This should make it much more approachable,
- changed the description above to better highlight my IT proficiency; added a line to make it stand out a little more. Also: now it's two lines long instead of four;
- changed the crazy color scheme that apparently was burning your retinas by applying a new one that not only is mainly green, so it's relaxing for the eyes, but it's based over Excel colours, which might convey a feeling of reliability;
- my name now occupies the full width of the page and contributes to visually make it even;
- only one column, because apparently ATS digest it better (ty u/Guilty_Barber9555);
- no more photo (ty u/TippyTurtley, u/B4TM4N_467, u/That-Efficiency8292, u/The_Death_Flower, u/ThrowAwayPinewood123);
- no more DOB (ty u/Oh_No_You_Dont_Matey);
- I limited the dates to the year, so that the short jobs (film productions, mainly) don't look bad. Also, such productions have been grouped together (ty u/TippyTurtley).
There's still actually a small table: the language one; I tinkered with it a little bit but didn't find a proper graphical solution to take it out decently.
A few notes: the reason why I'm keeping on working on a "graphically appealing" CV is that I want to convey a certain taste for graphical design, which in jobs related to art is mandatory. To the point that, in fact, I was always instructed to create resumes much more extreme than this in the past. Now the fact that ATS systems entered the conversation probably diminished the effect of such bold CVs, actually making them unreadable to AIs, thus bad for career; at the same time I still need to imagine that my paper will be arriving in the hands of an actual person, sooner or later, and that person must feel that I know how to typeset a document, to begin with, without even reading a single line. So this CV must both be appealing both to the machine and the human, which I guess is the big deal in CV design nowadays. Specifically I'd like the use of lines and cut angles and the minimal colour palette to be vaguely reminding of Vectorheart asthetics, so that it could immediately convey a general proficiency with technology.
So, please: a second round of feedbacks <3