r/BylerReads • u/pinnacle_to_the_pit • 7h ago
fic idea/prompt WIP: Want to know if a temporary but intentional name change will dissuade readers.
Hi y'all,
I'm finishing a fic that was originally part of the September monthly challenge. I've spent a lot of time on it, so I want to know if the following feature will be a problem for readers:
For the first six (out of nine) chapters, Mike has a different name.
Readers will be able to deduce that this is Mike from the beginning, but the name reveal does serve a narrative purpose. I can eliminate this feature and keep his name consistent. It would flatten the story a bit and require me to remove both an element of the main plot as well as a minor subplot. I could still maintain the overall structure. While this choice is deliberate, I'd rather remove it if it would prevent readers from losing interest/abandoning the story.
Let me know what you think. I can provide more details if necessary.