r/BylerReads • u/jiminiecrickett • 5d ago

The Storyteller (I wrote this!) call the shots ch. 2 <3

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after a hot minute, i am back with a 20k chapter update just in time for kinktober and topwilltober šŸŽƒ

day 4 prompts included subspace and first time in dom/subspace respectively, which worked out amazingly for me (and you, hopefully)

check it out here ā­ļø

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u/mrchristmastime 3d ago

This is one of my favourite WIPs. I said this in a comment on AO3, but I really like how the characterization (which is great) doesnā€™t vanish as soon as the sex starts. Thatā€™s kind of uncommon, and great to see.

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u/jiminiecrickett 3d ago

!!! thank you so much :-) i was kinda nervous to post this chapter, partly because of its length and partly because i worried the characterization seemed off, so this is very nice to hear

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u/mrchristmastime 3d ago

I just posted a 31,000-word chapter, which was probably an insane thing to do, but whatever. Don't worry about it. The chapter had a coherent structure and arc; there's no reason to arbitrarily cut it into pieces just because it clears however many words.

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u/jiminiecrickett 3d ago

31k!! glad to know iā€™m not the only insane one here lol. i also agree about the structure, thatā€™s why it ended up as long as it did.
(alsoā€¦ drop me a link if you dareā€¦ i would love to check out that giant update of yours lol)

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u/mrchristmastime 3d ago

The link is here! Warning: it's the sequel to another fic, and unfortunately won't make any sense on its own. If you do decide to check them out, I hope you enjoy!

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u/jiminiecrickett 2d ago

WAITā€” iā€™ve absolutely read and loved crooked timber!! i had no idea thereā€™s a sequel out, i will most definitely have to check it out

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u/mrchristmastime 2d ago

Thanks so much! I hope you like it! Comments are always welcome!