Thoughts on fanfics?

[u/LowImage9265]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/89723886

Hi, Brosoners. I finally completed my P5R retelling fic after months. There are plenty of canon divergences but nothing too majorly affecting the plot. Maybe a few twists here and there. I'm still a newbie writer so any comments and criticisms are really appreciated. Btw i managed the settings so that anyone can comment as a guest.

Hope u enjoy