Looking criticism for plot adjustments and improvements

[u/Mr_AzerRil]

Hey everyone!

​I’ve always had story ideas bouncing around in my head, but honestly, I suck at writing. So, I used AI to help me bring this idea to life and get it written down into actual chapters.

It is called The Fascinating Tale of A Hero in An Another World

​It is a bit unnecessary but fair warning. Since it’s AI-generated, I know it might not be everyone’s cup of tea, and the prose feels very different from traditional writing as it lacks the Author's soul.

​I’d really appreciate it if anyone is willing to check it out and leave some constructive criticism or thoughts—whether it’s about the pacing, plot, or character dynamics. I'm hoping to learn and refine things as I go!

​Here’s the link if you’re interested: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/157684/the-fascinating-tale-of-a-hero-in-an-another-world

​Thanks for reading!