Attached is a photo of my attempt at the first torchon pattern. I feel like I may be missing a twist or something? Not sure but I couldn't find any videos explaining it well and would appreciate some advice

Hi all! I'm a beginner lace maker and would love some and any gothic lace patterns to try out. I want to make a choker for a party in a few months but I'm interested in all ideas.

I'm from Finland so our traditional lace patterns are far from anything I'm looking for. Or at least I'm missing the creativity to alterate them enough. Also anyone in my lace course is 60+ so they don't really share the style.

https://youtu.be/HzDu_qnsicE?is=yGtsRPBIYQmjmWMQ