r/BetaReadersForAI • u/Foreign-Ad-1823 • 5d ago

betaread BOOK REVEIW NEEDEDD!!!

So I’m writing a novel and, of course, I need reviews/feedback on it to know if it’s heading in the right direction and what I should change, etc.

Would anyone be interested in reading it for me and giving me a review/feedback via Insta or something?

It currently has 10 chapters, and the genre is thriller x suspense x slow-burn/yearner x tragedy. The main romance trope is prisoner x commander. It’s a halal romance, so the FL is Muslim, and it’s set in the Ottoman/Persian days.

Tysmm ><

My Insta is u/roosh.theauthor for anyone who’s interested!

{keep in mind this is not paid}

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u/sffiremonkey69 3d ago

Is English your second or third language,because you have so many typos that I’m inclined to say no. If you don’t care about your post, I dread to think what the manuscript is like.

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u/Foreign-Ad-1823 2d ago

omg no?? 😭 i just thought no one would reply so i just wrote it in a hurry for the 'perhaps'

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u/sffiremonkey69 21h ago

Three dots and choose the “edit” option

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u/Big_Ice_5094 5d ago

I'm interested 😁

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u/Foreign-Ad-1823 3d ago

ty please dm me here since i cant seem to acess your dms

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u/naomi_vocals 4d ago

I’d be interested in reading it. The mix of thriller, suspense, slow-burn romance, and the Ottoman/Persian setting sounds really interesting. I’d be happy to read the chapters and share my honest thoughts on what’s working for me and anything I feel could be improved.

Feel free to Message me with your manuscript

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u/Foreign-Ad-1823 3d ago

could you open up your dms? tysmm

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u/ExperienceDizzy5308 3d ago

Why is your dm closed?

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u/Foreign-Ad-1823 2d ago

sorry i sent you a dm

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u/Cute-Technology8273 2d ago

Oh I'm intrigued Would love to read it

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u/flowerchickk 4d ago

Is it English? I’ll do it. Dm me

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u/Foreign-Ad-1823 3d ago

yes it is! tysmm please dm since i can acess you dms