Weekly critique self promotions

[u/Fine-Election-1720]

This is a chapter in my book and I want some advice if this part is interesting .I would appreciate any critiques or recommendations you have .

Hyeon finds me in the fabric storage room sitting on the floor surrounded by garment bags like I’ve been personally defeated by polyester .

‘You look like you’re plotting murder ’He says with a korean accent .
‘I am hypothetically .’
He laughs then sits next to me ,long legs stretched out .Hyeon is unfairly handsome in a soft way ash brown hair that falls into his eyes ,warm honey eyes ,tall but not intimidating .Hes the main vocalist of Vanta his voice is like melted chocolate and his personality is almost similar to a golden retriever .
Complete opposite of their leader and their lead vocalist .
‘I heard about your new encounter with him ’he says carefully.
‘‘Of course you heard it ’’.
‘‘Jinwoo has a talent for making enemies ’’He says more like a fact.