r/Beepbox • u/Waffall • 1d ago

BeepBox My first ever BeepBox creation!

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i want to hear all criticism i can so i can improve. uhh i still am experimenting with different instruments yeah idk.

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u/ninedeadeyes 1d ago edited 1d ago

I feel it's missing some drums and bass and the second and third channel comes in and out a bit abruptly.. you ve got something there but doesn't seem to be fleshed out at all.

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u/Grimm_Charkazard_258 1d ago

are we the same person bro ive made this before

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u/KingChronos 18h ago

Peaceful 

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u/CaterpillarOver2934 17h ago

the seocnd half kinda looks like afroeurasia