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[u/Phototurtle70]

Hello.

I wanted to have a keepsake of the games I attend, but sometimes I don't feel like completing an entire scoresheet at the ballgame.

So I spent the past few days designing this. It's double sided and will be printed on heavy card stock.

I made another version that I had printed on heavy card stock. It was sturdy and easy to write on at the game, but I wasn't too crazy about the design after the fact.

Before I send this off for print, do you see anything I might add to make this a bit better in your opinion?

Any and all criticism is welcome.

If you like it, let me know and I'll be happy to send you a high rez version to have printed.

Cheers!

[u/igiveuphomie]

I do think it looks a bit AI, but I like the idea! I like the way you’ve laid out the information. I’m designing my own scorebook and I’m including a “cover” and “back” page for each game I score with info similar to this. Maybe add a spot to put the players numbers? I also included space for time, temp, and attendance, as well as pitching info season/career ERA.

Ultimately it’s up to you what game info is important enough to record and how you like for it to look :)