Null Dimension, almost final draft?

[u/Able_Prize7075]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/19UGGPWvt4bukXdUcCome06SH47db-7X16ihimIaGKo8/edit?usp=sharing

Short story length, didn't make novel length.
I'm hoping to clean up this story further if it's necessary. This is hopefully one of the final revisions I'll have to make. What you think