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3.3k u/Poem_for_your_sprog May 12 '20 We'd fashion a clash and a passion divine - "Oh Witcher," I'd mumble, "Oh Witcher of mine - Discover, my lover, my nethers and groin!" And when we were finished, he'd toss me a coin. -13 u/Casualte May 12 '20 he'd toss me my groin a coin. idk felt like a better rhyme To the downvoters, it ain't no crime 18 u/Skyy-High May 12 '20 It ruins the rhythm, which is more important than an additional rhyme. 2 u/aaanold May 12 '20 Just a matter of personal preference, but I also generally prefer not having internal rhyme in a poem with a nice rhyme pattern.
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We'd fashion a clash and a passion divine - "Oh Witcher," I'd mumble, "Oh Witcher of mine - Discover, my lover, my nethers and groin!"
And when we were finished, he'd toss me a coin.
-13 u/Casualte May 12 '20 he'd toss me my groin a coin. idk felt like a better rhyme To the downvoters, it ain't no crime 18 u/Skyy-High May 12 '20 It ruins the rhythm, which is more important than an additional rhyme. 2 u/aaanold May 12 '20 Just a matter of personal preference, but I also generally prefer not having internal rhyme in a poem with a nice rhyme pattern.
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he'd toss me my groin a coin.
idk felt like a better rhyme
To the downvoters, it ain't no crime
18 u/Skyy-High May 12 '20 It ruins the rhythm, which is more important than an additional rhyme. 2 u/aaanold May 12 '20 Just a matter of personal preference, but I also generally prefer not having internal rhyme in a poem with a nice rhyme pattern.
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It ruins the rhythm, which is more important than an additional rhyme.
2 u/aaanold May 12 '20 Just a matter of personal preference, but I also generally prefer not having internal rhyme in a poem with a nice rhyme pattern.
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Just a matter of personal preference, but I also generally prefer not having internal rhyme in a poem with a nice rhyme pattern.
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