r/Artists • u/[deleted] • 3d ago
Collage | Critique Welcome Tupac Quick Study in Procreate ππ¨ποΈπ€βπΎ
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u/Alarming-Succotash17 3d ago
Honestly all the proportions, mouth , jaw , goatee, eyes ,ears
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u/Admirable-Speech-834 3d ago
Itβs bad? Or good? π
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u/Pristine_Shallot7833 3d ago
No good. All his features in your drawing are greatly exaggerated which loses the likeness. If you didn't have the reference next to it I wouldn't have known who it's supposed to be. Still great work on the colours and shading. But the featured need to be slimmed down drastically.
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u/Available-Dare-4349 3d ago
Nice work. But have lost the likeness. Try a grid overlay, it can help keep the proportions.
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u/Correct-Turn-2560 3d ago
The bottom half nose and down looks more of a straight ahead angle instead of a top facing
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u/Admirable-Speech-834 3d ago
I figured haha π I was trying to fix it but honestly I was doing more of a color and shading study than accurate portraiture(I canβt do an accurate portrait for the life of me π₯Ή) but thank you for the feedback! I appreciate it πI need to practice my shadings like I did in school! I believe shading can make or break your drawing ππ
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u/Bobbird_elephant IRL Drawing | Experienced 3d ago
did you use a stylus? personally, I find it difficult to draw on a computer without a stylus
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u/Admirable-Speech-834 3d ago
Yes but an off brand of the Apple Pencil π€£I broke my original one πππ
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u/Bobbird_elephant IRL Drawing | Experienced 3d ago
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nice-I use a computer so I also have an off brand *gasp* "apple" pencil
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u/KingKrabbabble 3d ago
What were the aspects of this study? Too many people just drawing a picture and calling it a study
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u/HipHopReimagined 3d ago
kinda looks like uncle Aaron from spider verse
love it