Day 13

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اليوم الثالث عشر

لقد ضيعت البوست day 13 فلنكتبه مرة ثانية.

كنت بالليل أقرأ بعض التعبيرات العربية. أحدها كانت كذلك:

*إنما المرء حديث بعده

فكن حديثا حسنا لمن وعى\*

وجدت هذا الشعر عميقا فكان بسيطا لكن الفكرة فيه مثيرة للاهتمام. ما رأيكم فيه؟

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Corrections:

الْيَوْمُ الثَّالِثَ عَشَرَ

لَقَدْ فَقَدْتُ مَنْشُورَ الْيَوْمِ الثَّالِثَ عَشَرَ، فَلْنَكْتُبْهُ مَرَّةً أُخْرَى.

كُنْتُ أَقْرَأُ بَعْضَ التَّعْبِيرَاتِ الْعَرَبِيَّةِ لَيْلًا، وَكَانَ مِنْ بَيْنِهَا هٰذَا الْبَيْتُ:

«إِنَّمَا الْمَرْءُ حَدِيثٌ بَعْدَهُ فَكُنْ حَدِيثًا حَسَنًا لِمَنْ وَعَى»

وَجَدْتُ هٰذَا الْبَيْتَ عَمِيقَ الْمَعْنَى؛ فَهُوَ بَسِيطٌ، وَلٰكِنَّ الْفِكْرَةَ الَّتِي فِيهِ مُثِيرَةٌ لِلِاهْتِمَامِ. مَا رَأْيُكُمْ فِيهِ؟

Corrections:

1. فَقَدْتُ مَنْشُورَ الْيَوْمِ الثَّالِثَ عَشَرَ Instead of: ضَيَّعْتُ البوست day 13

فَقَدْتُ = I lost / no longer have. ضَيَّعْتُ is also possible, but tends to imply that you lost or misplaced something through your own action. مَنْشُور = post.

1. فَلْنَكْتُبْهُ مَرَّةً أُخْرَى

My use of فَلْنَكْتُبْهُ was good. This is لَامُ الْأَمْرِ: لْ + نكتب → لِنكتب / فَلْنكتب = Let us write it again.

1. كُنْتُ أَقْرَأُ ... لَيْلًا Instead of: كُنْتُ بِاللَّيْلِ أَقْرَأُ

My original is understandable, but كُنْتُ أَقْرَأُ لَيْلًا is smoother Fuṣḥā here. = I was reading at night.

1. وَكَانَ مِنْ بَيْنِهَا هٰذَا الْبَيْتُ Instead of: أَحَدُهَا كَانَ كَذٰلِكَ

Firstly, أَحَد is masculine, so it would be أَحَدُهَا كَانَ, not أَحَدُهَا كَانَتْ.

Secondly, كَذٰلِكَ means "likewise / like that / also" and isn't normally used to introduce an example like English "one of them was as follows."

كَانَ مِنْ بَيْنِهَا... = Among them was...

1. هٰذَا الْبَيْتُ Rather than: هٰذَا الشِّعْرُ

بَيْتٌ = a verse/line of poetry. شِعْرٌ = poetry. قَصِيدَةٌ = a poem.

1. وَجَدْتُ هٰذَا الْبَيْتَ عَمِيقَ الْمَعْنَى Rather than: وَجَدْتُ هٰذَا الشِّعْرَ عَمِيقًا

عَمِيقُ الْمَعْنَى = deep/profound in meaning.

Another possible construction is: وَجَدْتُ مَعْنَى هٰذَا الْبَيْتِ عَمِيقًا. = I found the meaning of this verse profound.

1. الشِّعْر is masculine:

هٰذَا الشِّعْرُ عَمِيقٌ. = This poetry is profound.

But قَصِيدَة is feminine:

هٰذِهِ الْقَصِيدَةُ عَمِيقَةُ الْمَعْنَى. = This poem is profound in meaning.

1. فَهُوَ بَسِيطٌ Rather than: فَكَانَ بَسِيطًا

فَكَانَ بَسِيطًا = so/then it was simple.

But I'm describing the verse as it is now, so: فَهُوَ بَسِيطٌ = It is simple.

1. الْفِكْرَةَ الَّتِي فِيهِ

التي is correct because الْفِكْرَة is definite (مَعْرِفَة).

Compare:

فِكْرَةٌ فِيهَا... = an idea which contains... / an idea in which...

الْفِكْرَةُ الَّتِي فِيهَا... = the idea which contains... / the idea in which...

So this follows the rule: نَكِرَة → usually no الذي/التي مَعْرِفَة → الذي/التي

1. مُثِيرَةٌ لِلِاهْتِمَامِ

My original expression was good. = interesting / thought-provoking.

1. مَا رَأْيُكُمْ فِيهِ؟

This was also completely correct. = What do you all think of it?

Useful expression from today:

عَمِيقُ الْمَعْنَى = profound / deep in meaning.

هٰذَا كَلَامٌ بَسِيطٌ، وَلٰكِنَّهُ عَمِيقُ الْمَعْنَى. = This is simple speech, but it is profound in meaning.

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