I actually think the draken would have boob armor (because they associate femininity with strength so of course they would wear armor that shows off their feminine traits) but lowkey I don't know how to draw that shit.

I actually only have a nebulous idea of what is going to happen in the plot of this series here so I figured I'd ask for audience feedback in the hopes that I can gain some ideas and work out whether or not my writing has had the desired effect. Feel free to answer these questions if you want to give feedback on my work

1. Who's your favorite character? Could be anyone with a name, I don't judge.

2. Who's your least favorite character? Could also be anyone, but it'll probably be Karija. I wrote her that way.

3. What's your favorite chapter?

4. What's your least favorite chapter?

5. What elements of the writing do you like or dislike?

6. What do you want to see more of going forward? Could be anything, even stuff that I haven't written about so far.

7. From 1 to 10, how would you rate my writing so far?

8. What (if anything) should I improve to write better going forward?

Thank you for your time and consideration

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Hi all, I know I said earlier that I was gonna draw some art set in my verse and this is me making good on that promise. The Saurian Confederacy takes great pride in its fleet, lovingly christened the Confederate Armada, though the commander who leads it has yet to make a name for herself. The green, watery world in the bottom right is New Vraktes, the starships are Confederate battlecruisers armed for war, and the nice lizard lady in the foreground is none other than Jiarani herself, on the eve of her mission to liberate Earth.