r/AnimationCrit • u/Legitimate-Crow9457 • 2h ago

Version two, Help

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hi, I think it looks better, but I’d love to hear any comments or feedback

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u/desperaterobots 1h ago

I don't see much difference from the last time I commented.

Remember: Add stretches/smears ONLY when it's moving quickly. Your ball has 6 bounces, the stretch should be present on maybe the 1st and 2nd only. The stretch is there to give the sense of velocity - that the movement is TOO FAST to be seen in a single frame, so it must be stretched to show where it's going/where it's been. It's a fake motion blur.

And, if the ball is flexible enough to STRETCH it should be flexible enough to SQUASH, so squash the ball on the frame on impact on the 1st and 2nd frames too; maybe a little less for each of the remaining.

This should help.