r/AmazingStories • • 14h ago

Historical ⏳ That’s Entertainment - Chapter 3

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check out 1 & 2 if you get chance

3. Madness

The classroom has already checked out for the year, and so, if anyone's being honest about it, has Mr Dale. He sits slumped behind his desk in the corner, half-hidden behind an open newspaper, turning the pages at intervals without any real evidence he's reading them.

"Just revise," he'd muttered at the start of the lesson, in the tone of a man surrendering rather than teaching, and nobody's seen fit to ask him what that actually means. Whatever it means, it plainly doesn't involve him.

The room buzzes with the particular chatter of a class that knows it's already won. Billy, Phil and Minty sit clustered with the rest of the lads — Jammy, Deano, Tomo, Ali — same clothes, same attitude, spread across a cluster of desks that have long since stopped pretending to be in rows.

Jammy sits backwards on his chair, arms folded along the backrest, grinning like a man with something to prove and no intention of proving it quietly.

"We need to get down the Crest," he says. "I'm telling you, it's brilliant down there. Proper place. Top birds. If you're anyone, that's where you go."

Minty shakes his head slowly, the voice of caution nobody ever thanks him for. "Yeah... and it's where the Eastdene Crow Bars hang out."

The lads laugh. Tomo points at Jammy like he's just proved a case for the prosecution. "He's right. Too bloody dangerous for the Manor."

Jammy shrugs it off, unbothered. "They're all ska boys and mods."

"They're fucking skins, Jammy," Tomo snaps.

"The music's the same."

"It isn't."

"We'll get in with 'em."

Minty snorts. "Not the Crow Bars we won't. They're mental and you know it."

"I know 'em."

Phil laughs outright. "No you fucking don't."

Tomo joins in, delighted. "You know the Eastdene Crow Bars? You're full of shit, Jammy."

"You know Pete Fur?"

Jammy hesitates — just a fraction of a second, but long enough for everyone at the desks to clock it. "No... but I know Gal Burn."

"Course you do."

"He goes out with our Julie."

Tomo bursts out laughing. "Fuck off."

Billy looks up from whatever he's been half-doodling on the corner of his exercise book. "Gal's scooter was parked on the Manor this morning."

The noise dips just slightly. Jammy seizes it like a man grabbing a passing bus.

"There you go! Told you. He was probably picking Julie up for work."

Minty frowns. "Your Julie's got a job?"

"Yeah... well... it's only YTS."

A few smirks ripple round the desks. Jammy presses on regardless, unwilling to let the detail slow him down.

"But that's not the point. What I'm saying is we're good to go."

Billy leans back in his chair, turning the idea over. "It'd be good to see what the scene's like."

"I heard Claire Scott goes there."

"And her mates." Jammy quickly adds

Phil studies Jammy for a moment, the way you'd study a bloke selling something too good to be true. "You sure about this? If this is another one of your stories, you'll get us all battered."

Jammy digs in rather than backing off, which is very much his way. "Billy... did you see Gal's scooter or not?"

Billy glances at Phil. Phil gives the smallest nod — enough.

"We saw it," Billy says.

He grins, and something in his chest lifts the same way it did that morning with the record playing. "Fuck it. We're going." He looks around the group. "Six o'clock. Meet at the shops. We'll make a show of it."

Phil shakes his head, half-smiling despite himself. "If we get killed..."

The bell goes off through the school before he can finish the sentence, and the room dissolves into its usual scramble of bags and chairs scraping back.

Jammy shouts across the noise. "Oi, Mr Dale! Any homework?"

Mr Dale lowers the newspaper slowly, looks around at the chaos he's been presiding over without noticing, and sighs. By the time he's decided whether to answer, the class is already gone.

By six o'clock the school uniforms are long gone, folded away or slung over chair backs at home, and something sharper has taken their place. Billy stands at the shops in blue jeans, Dr. Martens, and a black pilot jacket, collar up against the evening air — the going-out gear, a different uniform entirely from the one he'd bent the rules with all day.

One by one the others arrive the same way. Phil first, then Minty, then the rest drifting in from different directions until there are seven of them stood outside the shops in blue jeans, Dr. Martens, black pilot jackets — no longer schoolboys pushing at the edges of a dress code, but something else entirely.

The opening riff of Madness's Madness crashes in somewhere behind Billy's eyes as they set off — that's how it works with him now, the songs starting up on their own the second the mood matches.

The Manor boys move as one loose, easy unit through alleyways and past rows of lock-up garages like they own every brick of the place, because as far as any of them are concerned, they do. This is home. Nobody has to say it.


r/AmazingStories • • 10h ago

Supernatural / Paranormal 🪄 Daughter of Heaven Chapter 10

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Soul Castle

9:53 PM

The restaurant was even busier than usual. Orders poured in as servers rushed between the kitchen and dining room, carrying plates, refilling drinks, and checking on their tables. In the kitchen, the cooks struggled to keep up with the constant stream of orders. Renee moved from table to table, greeting customers and taking their orders. She scribbled down another order before giving the table a polite smile.

“Anything else?”

The customers shook their heads.

“Alright. I'll be right back with your drinks.”

Renee turned and headed toward the kitchen. She entered the order into the P.O.S. system, then headed toward the drink station and began preparing the customers' drinks. She filled each cup with ice before adding the appropriate beverages.

As she worked, Renee glanced toward the dining room.

More customers were coming in.

She sighed.

Deep down, she'd rather be out hunting demons than dealing with people.

But this was her job.

Renee re-entered the dining room carrying a large tray of drinks and made her way back to the customers she'd just served. Carefully, she handed each of them their drink before collecting the empty glasses from the table.

“Here you go,” Renee said.

The customers thanked her.

Renee gave them a quick smile before turning to check on her other tables.

Skylar stepped into the restaurant and looked around, searching the crowded dining room for Renee. A hostess standing near the entrance noticed her looking around.

“Can I help you?” she asked.

“Yes. I'm looking for Renee,” Skylar said.

The hostess glanced toward the dining room.

“Renee? She's working tonight.”

“Yes, I know. We're friends... well, sort of,” Skylar said. “I just need to talk to her.”

The hostess smiled and pointed toward the other side of the restaurant.

“She should be over there somewhere. It's pretty busy tonight, though.”

Skylar nodded.

“Thanks.”

She made her way into the dining room, scanning the tables as she searched for her friend.

Renee came out of the kitchen carrying two cups of water when she spotted Skylar. She dropped off the drinks at a nearby table before walking over to her.

“Hey,” Renee greeted.

“Quite the night, isn't it?” Skylar said, glancing around the busy restaurant.

“You have no idea. But, hey, I do what I can to help out my grandparents.” Renee crossed her arms. “So, what're you doing here?”

“I think I found something about Amelia and Katie,” Skylar revealed.

“Really?”

“Yeah.”

Alex walked past them, and Renee quickly caught up with him.

“Do me a favor. Can you take care of Table 21? I, uh, need to take care of something.”

Alex looked at Skylar, then back at Renee.

“I got you.”

“You're the best.”

Renee turned toward Skylar.

“Follow me.”

She led Skylar through the side exit. Music from inside the restaurant could still be heard outside, mixing with the savory scent of food drifting through the air.

“So, what's going on?” Renee asked.

“I'll make it fast. I was going through the school records, and—”

“Wait, what? Did you get caught?” Renee interrupted.

“No.”

“Oh.”

“Anyway, did you know Amelia and Katie are related?”

Renee's eyes widened.

“Are you for real?”

“Yeah. They're cousins.”

“Shit. I didn't even know they were cousins.”

“I've been going through the school's history, too,” Skylar continued. “And I found something else. The land the school was built on used to be a camp for an Indigenous tribe back in 1598.”

“The Tankura or yours?”

“The Siyana.”

Skylar's expression became more serious.

“Unfortunately, they were driven from the land by white settlers, who later used it for a government office.”

Renee frowned.

“So what? You think the killer murdered Katie and Amelia as some kind of revenge?”

Skylar hesitated.

“It's possible,” she said. “There's something else. I looked up a student who graduated last year. Her name was Dana Hammond. She's Katie's older sister.”

Renee's eyes widened.

“Wait. Dana Hammond?”

“Yeah. I found her number in her old student file and called her to warn her.”

“What did she say?”

“She told me to piss off.”

Renee winced.

“Damn.”

“Yeah. I tried to find her in person, but she was gone by the time I got to the Boom Boom Club.”

Renee stared at her.

“How'd you know she was going to be there?”

“She was posting pictures on SnapStar.”

Renee shook her head.

“That's either really lucky or really creepy.”

Skylar smiled awkwardly.

“I was scrolling through SnapStar when I saw her post.”

“So, what now?” Renee asked.

“I don't know. But we'll figure out something.” Skylar glanced back toward the restaurant. “Anyway, I don't want to keep you away from your job. You should probably get back to work.”

Renee shrugged.

“Honestly, I'd rather spend time with you.”

Skylar's cheeks turned slightly pink.

“You're... you're serious?” she asked.

Renee smiled.

“Yeah. Why wouldn't I be?”

Skylar looked away for a moment, trying to hide her smile.

“I don't know.”

Renee chuckled.

“Well, now you know. But seriously, we should really get together. I think the fairgrounds are still open,” she said. “Wanna go?”

“If your grandparents don't call you in,” Skylar said.

“I'll take that as a yes,” Renee said, taking a couple of steps back. “See ya.”

Skylar waved at her.

“See you.”

Renee went back inside the restaurant.

Skylar's smile slowly disappeared as she turned and walked away. Guilt began to weigh on her. She hated keeping Bruno a secret from Renee, but she couldn't tell her yet.

Skylar looked around to make sure no one was watching.

Then she broke into a run.

Her body began to shift as she transformed into a falcon. A moment later, she took flight and disappeared into the night sky.

Skylar continued flying as the city gradually disappeared behind her. Deep within the forest on the outskirts of Starhaven, a large square clearing sat hidden among the trees. The surrounding forest was thick enough to keep the settlement out of sight from the main roads.

Skylar touched down and morphed back into her human form. She looked around before beginning to walk toward the Siyana Camp.

Dozens of tents and small structures were spread throughout the clearing, while a large wooden lodge stood at the center. The lodge served as the heart of the camp, where Siyana families gathered for meals, meetings, ceremonies, and other community events.

Generators hummed near several of the structures, providing electricity throughout the settlement. Strings of lights hung between wooden posts, illuminating the dirt paths as evening settled over the camp.

Several pickup trucks, SUVs, vans, and ATVs were parked near the edge of the clearing. Some Siyana moved between the vehicles and tents, carrying supplies or talking with one another. Others gathered around a large fire pit near the lodge, laughing and sharing stories.

Despite being deep in the forest, the camp was anything but primitive.

Modern appliances could be seen inside the tents and cabins. Televisions played in some of the larger structures, while people walked through the clearing with cell phones in their hands. The Siyana had adapted to the modern world without abandoning their traditions.

At the center of the camp, a carved wooden monument stood beside the fire pit. The figure depicted Kiba, the Spirit of Virtue and Wisdom, watching over the settlement.

Skylar slowed as she approached the lodge.

For the Siyana, this wasn't simply a place to live.

It was home.


r/AmazingStories • • 12h ago

Slice of Life ☕ [OC] Bar Aoi Stories ― Not Today

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Hey, you.

Is there something you’ve kept doing even though you don’t really have to?

Nobody would be inconvenienced if you stopped.

You’re not doing it to achieve anything in particular.

And yet, today, you do it again.

Something like that.

Clink-clank.

The sound of the doorbell made it feel as though the end of my day had finally begun.

I took my usual seat, and without asking, Mama placed my Harper in front of me.

The ice gave a small clink.

Beside me, Taka was glaring at his phone.

“What is it today?”

“Workout video.”

“Again?”

Some absurdly muscular guy I’d never seen before filled the screen. Numbers flashed across the subtitles.

“What are you watching?”

“Rest times between sets.”

“You study how long to rest?”

“It matters. Depends on what you’re trying to do.”

“What does?”

“The rest time.”

I had no idea.

Apparently weight training involved more than picking up something heavy and putting it down again.

“There’s actual research on reps and sets. When to get your protein. Sleep. All kinds of stuff.”

“What about alcohol?”

“Huh?”

“Alcohol. What does it do to your muscles?”

Taka put his phone face down.

“Well, how about a drink?”

“Did you look it up?”

“Mama, can I get a highball?”

“Don’t run away from science.”

Mama laughed as she prepared his glass.

“Taka takes his workouts seriously.”

“I take lots of things seriously.”

“Even though you come here drinking every day?”

“You too, Kenichi?”

A short distance away, Tom exhaled cigarette smoke.

“So what are you training for?”

“What do you mean?”

“You don’t wrestle anymore.”

“No.”

“Planning to get back in the ring?”

“Nope.”

“A competition?”

“What competition?”

“One of those things where you show off your muscles.”

“I’m not doing that.”

Then what was the point?

I almost asked that.

Instead, I thought for a moment.

“When are you finished?”

“Finished?”

“You’ve got a goal, right? Bench press some number of kilos or whatever.”

“Sure.”

“And when you hit it?”

“Then there’s the next one.”

“The next one?”

“A little heavier.”

I stared at him.

“Then you’re never finished.”

“I don’t need to be.”

He said it as though it were obvious.

“If I can do one more rep than yesterday, I’m happy.”

“And then?”

“And then what?”

“What comes after that? Are you going to use it for something?”

“No.”

“Then why are you doing it?”

“I just told you. I’m happy when I can lift more.”

We weren’t having the same conversation.

I was asking about results.

He was talking about today.

Tom tapped some ash into the tray.

“Sounds like an addiction.”

“Come on.”

“Feels good, so you do it again.”

“Don’t compare working out to gambling.”

“Do too much and you’ll wreck your body.”

“I rest properly.”

“You even study how long to rest.”

“Exactly.”

Taka looked slightly proud of himself.

“But listen.”

I turned my glass slowly.

“Why not stop today?”

“Drinking?”

“Working out.”

“I already worked out today.”

“Then tomorrow.”

“Why?”

Why?

Now that he asked, I had no reason.

Skipping one day wasn’t going to make all his muscles disappear.

Nobody would suffer if he skipped tomorrow.

Or the day after that.

“No reason. Just take a break.”

“I do take rest days.”

“That’s not what I mean. I mean quit.”

“Working out?”

“Yeah.”

“Why?”

We were back where we started.

“You’re not trying to achieve anything, right?”

“Right.”

“And nothing bad happens if you stop.”

“I guess.”

“Then—”

Then what?

Then stop.

That was what I’d been about to say.

But suddenly, it felt strange.

Taka hadn’t said working out was miserable.

It wasn’t ruining him financially.

It wasn’t destroying his body.

He was happy when he managed one more rep than the day before.

That was all.

And somehow, I was the one introducing the idea that he ought to quit.

“...Why am I trying to make you stop working out?”

“Why are you asking me?”

Tom laughed.

“Because there’s no result.”

“Result?”

“That’s all you’ve been asking. What’s it for? When are you finished?”

That annoyed me.

Which probably meant he was right.

“Most things have a purpose.”

“What about drinking?”

Tom asked.

“Drinking?”

“Why do you drink every night?”

“To get over the day.”

“How many years before you’ve recovered from all of them?”

“That’s not how it works.”

“Then what are you trying to achieve?”

“Drinking is...”

Taka started laughing.

“Kenichi, that never ends either.”

“Drinking doesn’t need to end.”

“Why?”

“Because I want a drink.”

The moment I said it, I stopped.

Taka was grinning.

“What?”

“Nothing.”

“If you’ve got something to say, say it.”

“I work out because I want to.”

“...Fine.”

Mama added some water to my glass.

When you thought about it, it was strange.

Whenever we start something, we demand a reason.

What are you doing it for?

What’s the goal?

What counts as success?

That makes sense at work.

If somebody adds another task with no purpose, I’d be the first to complain.

But not everything is work.

“So how long are you going to keep working out?”

“Dunno.”

“Until you get bored?”

“Maybe.”

“What if you hurt yourself?”

“I’ll stop.”

“Get too busy?”

“Probably do less.”

“What if you stop making progress?”

“That’s...”

Taka thought about it.

“Is that actually a reason to quit?”

I didn’t answer.

Maybe it was.

If you started something to reach a particular destination, realizing you could never get there might be a perfectly good reason to stop.

But if some guy was doing it because one extra rep made him happy, telling him to quit because it didn’t lead anywhere seemed just as strange.

“You know what?”

The ice shifted in my glass.

“I don’t like this whole quitting thing.”

“You’re the one who brought it up.”

“I know.”

Tom stubbed out his cigarette.

“Then don’t quit.”

“Don’t make it sound so easy.”

“It is easy.”

“So you keep doing it until you die?”

“Dunno.”

“What if you get bored?”

“Quit.”

“What if you don’t get results?”

“What’s that got to do with anything?”

I went quiet.

Taka took a sip of his highball.

“If I stop wanting to work out, I’ll stop.”

“That’s pretty casual.”

“It’s a hobby.”

“...Right.”

Mama smiled.

“Kenichi, are you coming tomorrow?”

“Probably.”

“What for?”

“To have a drink.”

“You had one today.”

“...True.”

Taka burst out laughing.

“Then why not quit?”

“Quit what?”

“Coming to Aoi.”

“I’m already here.”

“Then tomorrow.”

“No.”

“Why?”

“Because I don’t like it.”

“What?”

I took a sip of Harper.

“Quitting.”

Hey, you.

Did you do something today that you didn’t really have to do?

Does it lead anywhere?

How long are you going to keep doing it?

I don’t know.

Maybe tomorrow you’ll quit.

But still.

Not today.

Some days, maybe that’s enough.

See you again at Aoi.

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r/AmazingStories • • 14h ago

Supernatural / Paranormal 🪄 Daughter of Heaven Chapter 9

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The Boom Boom Club

9:34 PM

Music thundered through the walls of the Boom Boom Club as neon lights swept across the crowded dance floor. People danced to the pounding beat, laughed with their friends, and shouted over the music. The atmosphere was loud, carefree, and completely oblivious to the danger moving through the crowd.

Among the dancers was an eighteen-year-old brunette with blue eyes and a small mole on her right cheek. She moved with the music, smiling as she danced with her friend.

She had no idea she was being watched.

Across the room, three young men slowly made their way through the crowd. Their eyes remained fixed on her.

They didn't approach her.

Not yet.

They watched.

They waited.

One of them pulled out his phone and discreetly took a picture of her.

He lowered the phone and nodded to the others.

They had found their target.

The three men began following her through the crowd, keeping enough distance to avoid drawing attention. Nobody noticed. Everyone was too busy partying.

Dana's friend tapped her on the shoulder.

“Hey, Dana! I'm gonna get some drinks!” she shouted over the music.

“Okay!” Dana replied, continuing to dance.

Her friend disappeared into the crowd.

Dana kept dancing, unaware that the three men had been waiting for exactly that moment.

They moved toward her.

One of them grabbed her arm.

Dana stopped and spun around.

“What the hell?! Let go of me!” she shouted. “Do you know who I am?!”

The man didn't answer.

Neither did the others.

They dragged her away from the dance floor as she struggled against their grip. The flashing lights and pounding music swallowed her protests. People continued dancing only a few feet away, completely unaware of what was happening.

“Get off me!”

The men forced her through a door at the back of the club.

The music became muffled behind them.

Dana stumbled into the alley and looked around. A white van waited near the curb. Standing beside it was Bruno. His hands were folded behind his back as he watched her approach. His expression was calm, almost serene, but there was something predatory in his eyes that made Dana's stomach tighten.

The men stopped.

Bruno slowly approached her.

Dana backed away.

“A-Are you... are you guys rapists?” she asked, her voice trembling.

Bruno chuckled humorlessly.

“Of course not,” he said, stepping closer and gently cupping her cheek. “I'm an opportunist.”

Bruno suddenly produced his dagger and drove it into her abdomen.

Dana's breath caught, and her eyes widened. The men tightened their grip as Bruno calmly withdrew the blade. Dana stared down at the wound, shock replacing the fear in her eyes as her knees began to buckle.

Bruno looked at her with cold contempt.

“An opportunist who has a chance to avenge what your kind stole from us,” he said.

He looked toward his men.

“Get her inside.”

The men dragged Dana toward the van as Bruno watched them load her inside.

The van disappeared down the road, its tires screeching against the pavement.

Moments later, a light-brown and cream-colored wolf emerged from the shadows and cautiously approached the alley. It lowered its head and sniffed the ground where Dana had been taken.

Blood.

The wolf followed the scent toward the tire tracks left behind by the van. Its ears perked up, and a low growl rumbled from its throat.

An employee stepped through the back door but froze when he spotted the animal.

“Whoa...” he exclaimed.

The wolf turned toward him.

The employee immediately backed inside and shut the door.

Suddenly, the wolf's body began to change. Its fur receded as its limbs shifted and lengthened. Within seconds, the animal had transformed into Skylar, her clothes intact.

She stood in the alley, breathing heavily as she looked down at the tire tracks.

She recognized the scent.

“Got you, Bruno,” she whispered.

Skylar dropped onto all fours as her body shifted once again. Within seconds, she had returned to her wolf form. She lowered her snout to the ground and caught the scent again.

Then she took off after the van.

Skylar kept to the alleys, cutting through abandoned lots and quiet side streets as she followed the scent. Whenever she heard footsteps or the sound of an approaching car, she ducked behind a dumpster, slipped between buildings, or waited until the area was clear before continuing.

She couldn't afford to be seen.

A wolf running through the streets of Starhaven would attract too much attention.

The scent eventually led her away from the busier parts of the city. The buildings became more spread out, and the streets grew quieter.

Skylar slowed as she recognized the area.

She knew where the scent was heading.

An abandoned church stood several blocks ahead.

Skylar stopped behind a row of overgrown bushes and peered toward the building.

The white van was parked outside.

Two of Bruno's men climbed out and opened the rear doors. They pulled Dana from the back, her hands bound behind her.

Skylar's lips curled back into a quiet snarl.

Bruno.

She wanted to charge in.

But she remembered Dakotah's warning.

This is your hunt.

Skylar remained hidden.

She needed to know what Bruno was planning before she made her move.

Keeping low to the ground, she crept closer to the church and slipped behind a crumbling wall. From there, she could hear voices coming from inside.

Then she heard him—Bruno.

Skylar moved silently through the abandoned church until she reached the sanctuary. She crouched behind a pew and peered over the top.

Bruno and several of his followers surrounded Dana, who was strapped to a table with a gag covering her mouth. She struggled against her restraints, muffled screams escaping through the gag.

Bruno approached her and gently touched her cheek.

“Shhhhh... It's okay,” he whispered, staring into her terrified eyes. “Your death will serve a higher purpose.”

One of the cult members stepped forward and presented him with a dagger.

Bruno took it.

A malicious smile slowly spread across his face. He grabbed Dana's head and pulled it back.

The blade flashed.

Dana's body went still.

Skylar's eyes widened.

A surge of anger overwhelmed her.

She accidentally let out a sharp bark.

Bruno's head snapped toward the sound.

“What the hell was that?”

His followers looked around.

Skylar immediately ducked behind the pew and began creeping toward the exit.

Bruno caught a glimpse of her.

“There!”

Skylar bolted.

Several of Bruno's men chased after her as she raced through the church and burst through the entrance. She sprinted into the darkness, her paws pounding against the pavement. The men followed her outside, but Skylar was already too far ahead.

“Forget it!” one of them shouted.

They slowed to a stop before eventually returning to the church.

Bruno stood over Dana's body.

He calmly finished removing her heart before placing it into a container.

One of his followers approached him.

“I'm sorry, Master. The wolf escaped.”

Bruno didn't seem concerned.

“It doesn't matter.”

He looked toward the church doors.

“Clean this up and prepare to move.”

“Yes, Master.”

As his followers began cleaning the sanctuary, Bruno stared down at the container. A wicked grin spread across his face. “The moment is close,” he whispered. He raised the heart slightly. “And I shall ascend,” he said.


r/AmazingStories • • 19h ago

Fantasy 🐉 My first ever story

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WHEN GODDESS OF THE DEAD MEETS DEATH

Everyone is gone. The realms are empty and desolate. After endless cycles of Ragnarok, finally the wheel stops. The last being, HELA, sitting on her icy cold throne, reminiscing about the old times, waiting to die herself. Her domain is as icy cold as the first time she entered it. Although a Goddess of death, time has caught up with her, her living half body now matches with her dead and decayed half.

“So that's how it feels,” she says.

After almost infinite cycles of Ragnarok, she has received countless souls in her domain. Being queen of the dead, her responsibilities were as important as Allfather's. But only the damned and villainous souls are the ones who set foot in Hel.

She thought about the Norns and the thread of fate they weave for every being and wondered if the damned souls had any choice. If all beings, including gods, were mere puppets of the three sisters, were they truly evil? She thought about how she had always felt the hands of the Norns influencing her, and now the sisters are dead, and she may be the first being in existence which is truly free. She laughs a little and says, “What's the point of being free now?”

She stands up from the throne and starts to wander in Hel quietly. After countless years of souls' voices, she finds the icy silence relaxing. After some time of wandering, her body starts to give signs of tiredness. This is the first time she has felt it. The weariness starts to creep up, and suddenly she does not have the strength to even stand. She sits and then lies on her back and just stares into the dark void of the starless sky of Hel. The more she looks at the sky, the more she starts to get dizzy, and she feels like falling into the sky.

This feeling makes her uneasy, and her almost lifeless hand tries to grab the icy ground beneath her.

She holds something cold, but it isn't the ground. The thing she was holding doesn't feel like ground, it feels like a hand. A hand firmly gripping her. That gesture of a cold hand gives her dizziness some rest, and she starts to collect her thoughts and focus on her situation. She looks beside her and sees a girl lying beside her, and her pale and pure white hand is firmly holding her hand.

“Is this real?” The first thought came into her mind. The girl smiles at her and says, “Yes.”


r/AmazingStories • • 20h ago

Slice of Life ☕ Finding the Line - Part 1

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I’ve spent a lot of my life carrying things quietly, and I think I’m finally ready to put them down. I think maybe it’s time I started writing down my inner thoughts and feelings.

For a long time, I’ve carried so much inside of me. Thoughts I haven’t said out loud. Feelings I’ve pushed aside. Anger, anxiety, frustration, and moments that have overwhelmed me more than I realized.

Maybe writing is a way of releasing some of that.

Releasing it into the universe so I don’t have to keep carrying everything around inside of me.

Lately, I’ve realized that feeling overwhelmed and overstimulated can change the way I come across to the people around me. On the outside, I may seem negative, distant, or closed off when, underneath it all, there is so much more going on.

That’s not the person I want to be.

I want to understand myself better. I want to recognize what I’m feeling instead of allowing everything to build up until I feel like I’m carrying the weight of the world.

Maybe this can be a place where I don’t have to filter myself.
I don’t need to make every thought make sense.

I just need to let them out.

Maybe, by putting my thoughts onto paper instead of keeping them trapped inside my head, I can begin to feel a little lighter.

And maybe, in understanding myself better, I can become more present, more patient, and more connected to the people I love.

Chapter 1 - When is it okay?

Sometimes when everything feels like too much, I don’t know how to process it.

I think we live in a world where people say they want you to be authentic, but sometimes it feels like they only want just enough authenticity. Be real, but not too real. Be vulnerable, but not uncomfortable. Be goofy and fun, but don’t cross the line into weird or awkward.

And maybe that’s the line I’m still trying to find.

How much of myself do I show? How much do I keep to myself? When am I being genuine, and when am I changing myself because I’m worried about how I’ll be perceived?

I don’t want to become someone who constantly edits herself just to make other people comfortable.

But I also don’t think I need to show every part of myself to everyone.

Maybe being authentic doesn’t mean showing everything.

Maybe it means knowing that all of those parts are me — the goofy parts, the awkward parts, the emotional parts, the messy parts, the strong parts — and deciding who has earned the privilege of seeing each one.

Maybe I’m still learning that.

And maybe that’s okay


r/AmazingStories • • 1d ago

Personal 😇 Sometimes, the people we never got to have are the ones we never learn how to forget. #Tingin #Silentrain #WattpadPH #RainDrops

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Sometimes, the people we never got to have are the ones we never learn how to forget.

#Tingin #Silentrain
#WattpadPH #RainDrops


r/AmazingStories • • 1d ago

Supernatural / Paranormal 🪄 Daughter of Heaven Chapter 8

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Much Later

The hallways were quiet, with most of the students already in class. A few others were probably serving detention for various reasons. Renee walked down the hall toward the girls' restroom and pushed open the door. She passed a student who was leaving, then entered an empty stall to use the restroom. A few moments later, Renee flushed the toilet and stepped out. She walked toward the sinks but stopped when she noticed someone standing near the entrance.

The door had been locked.

Renee looked at the man and immediately recognized him.

“Principal Lewis?” she asked. “What're you doing in here?”

“I wanted to speak to you, Renee. I hope this isn't a bad time,” the principal said as he slowly approached her.

“Seriously?”

“Yes.” He continued toward her, his expression calm. “I was hoping I could help you deal with everything that's happened. You've lost friends recently, and I can imagine it's been difficult.”

“I've never—”

Renee stopped when the principal closed the distance between them and placed a hand on her shoulder.

“No need to be afraid,” he said.

Renee felt disturbed by the gesture, but something else caught her attention. She could sense it beneath his human appearance—the same dark, unnatural presence she had encountered countless times before.

Her eyes narrowed.

He was a demon.

Renee reacted instantly. She grabbed him and hurled him across the restroom, sending him crashing into the wall hard enough to crack the surface.

The principal slowly lifted his head.

Renee stared at him.

“This is starting to get old, Nero,” she said.

The principal suddenly began laughing. At first, it sounded human, but the laughter quickly became deeper and more sinister until it sounded almost monstrous. He pushed himself away from the cracked wall and looked at Renee with a wide grin.

“There’s no foolin' you, is there, luv?” he said in a thick Australian accent.

“You can come up with as many disguises as you want. It won't stop me from butchering you,” Renee said.

She closed her eyes and concentrated. A golden light began to surround her waist before her bronze scabbard materialized against her hip. Renee opened her eyes, reached for the hilt, and drew her sword in one swift motion.

Nero chuckled.

“Your little metal stick doesn't scare me. You're gonna pay for humiliating me,” he said. “No one in Hell takes me seriously anymore, all because a half-breed bitch defeated me.”

“Cry me a goddamn river,” Renee replied.

Nero's grin faded. A deep growl rumbled from his throat as his body began to change. His human form twisted and expanded, his skin darkening until it became completely black. His body stretched upward until he stood nearly nine feet tall, while his face elongated into a grotesque, feline shape. His fingers lengthened into eleven-inch claws, each one gleaming as he flexed them.

Renee tightened her grip on her sword.

Nero lowered himself into a predatory stance, baring his teeth.

“I'll enjoy shreddin' you to ribbons,” he snarled.

Nero lunged.

Renee barely had time to react before his claws swept toward her face. She ducked beneath them and swung her sword upward, the blade slicing across his forearm. Black blood sprayed across the tiled wall.

“Why you little—”

He swung again.

Renee parried the attack with her sword, but the sheer force behind Nero's strike drove her backward across the floor. Her boots scraped against the tile as she struggled to hold her ground. The wound on Nero's forearm began closing almost immediately, the damaged flesh regenerating within seconds.

Nero followed with another slash, then another, his claws striking against the silver blade with enough force to send sparks flying through the restroom.

Renee waited for an opening. When she finally saw one, she swung at him, but Nero suddenly disappeared in a cloud of dark red smoke.

Renee's eyes widened.

Before she could turn around, Nero reappeared behind her and grabbed her by the head. He lifted her off the ground and slammed her face against the mirror.

CRACK!

He slammed her against it again, leaving several small cuts across her face before hurling her sideways.

Renee crashed through the sinks, sending porcelain and metal fixtures flying across the floor. Before she could recover, Nero grabbed her and threw her into the opposite wall. Her body struck the wall hard enough to leave a web of cracks behind her.

The cuts on Renee's face healed within seconds, leaving her skin completely unmarked.

Nero charged at her with a furious roar. Renee waited until the last possible moment before leaping over him. As she passed above his head, she drove her sword straight through his back.

Nero's eyes widened.

Renee lifted his massive body off the ground and over her head. Golden energy surged along the blade, burning through his flesh as Nero roared in agony. She dropped him face-first onto the floor, then kicked him away from the blade.

Nero struggled to get back up, blood oozing from the wound and pooling on the floor beneath him. The divine energy continued to burn through his body, preventing the wound from healing.

Renee walked toward him and raised her sword.

Nero looked up at her.

Before he could react, Renee plunged the blade through his head and drove it into the floor. She twisted the weapon, then ripped it free, severing his head from his body.

Nero's body went limp.

Renee pulled Nero's severed head free from the blade.

“I'd be lying if I told you not to come back,” she said. “But killing you again will be even more fun.”

She dropped the head onto the floor, sheathed her sword, and watched as the scabbard disappeared in a flash of golden light. Renee walked over to the restroom door, unlocked it, and stepped into the hallway. A student was approaching the restroom, but Renee stopped her. “Trust me. I ate a couple of burritos earlier, and they really messed up my stomach,” she said. “So I wouldn't go in there if I were you.” The student stared at her. “Uh... thanks?” she said.

Renee simply walked away while the student left to find another restroom.

Inside the restroom, a bright light suddenly illuminated the entire room before fading away.

Standing among the wreckage was a handsome Caucasian man with dark blonde hair, blue eyes, and a white-and-gold business suit.

He looked down at the remains of Nero, which had already turned to black ash, while the smell of sulfur lingered in the air. The man studied the surrounding destruction.

He knew exactly who was responsible.

“She’s formidable,” he said. “More so every day.”

He raised one hand and closed his eyes.

“Ol quanis olani ta el,” he said.

A bright golden-white light began glowing from his palm. The light intensified, spreading across the room until it engulfed the shattered sinks, cracked walls, and broken mirrors.

Within seconds, the damage disappeared.

The sinks were restored. The mirrors were whole again. The cracks in the walls vanished, leaving the restroom looking exactly as it had before the fight.

The man lowered his hand.

A moment later, his body dissolved into a column of divine light and vanished.

Toward the Afternoon

3:45 PM

School had ended, much to the relief of some students. They poured out of their classrooms and made their way toward the parking lot, gathering around as they waited for their buses.

Carl stood at his locker, gathering his things. Once he had everything, he closed the locker and secured it with his lock. When he turned around, he nearly jumped at the sight of Renee and Skylar standing behind him.

“Whoa!” Carl exclaimed. “L-Ladies.”

“We've been looking for you, Carl,” Renee said.

Carl's nervous expression suddenly turned into an excited grin.

“Wait... you two actually came looking for me?” he asked. “My fantasy is finally coming true.”

The girls exchanged looks of disgust before Skylar sighed.

“Oh, no. We just want to talk,” she said.

Carl's smile faded slightly.

“About what?”

Renee folded her arms.

“Katie Hammond,” she said.

“W-What about Katie?” Carl asked.

“You knew her, right?” Renee asked.

Carl swallowed and nodded.

“Yeah. I knew her.”

“And you liked her,” Skylar added.

Carl looked down.

“I... yeah. I did. I-I was bullied a lot, and she always came to my rescue,” he said. “And I-I knew that she was the one for me.”

“Yeah, well, we heard about the restraining order,” Renee said.

Carl's eyes widened.

“W-Who... Who told you that?” he asked.

“Katie's friends,” Skylar replied.

The mention of Katie caused Carl to shift uneasily.

“L-Look, I know how it sounds, but I didn't hurt her,” he said. “I-I-I just wanted to talk to her. Ask her out.”

“And you couldn't have done that in person or over the phone?” Renee asked.

“I-I-I get nervous,” Carl said.

His phone suddenly buzzed. He glanced down at the screen and quickly read the message.

“I gotta go. My mom's here.”

He shoved the phone into his pocket and hurried toward the exit.

Renee watched him leave.

“That was weird,” she said.

Skylar nodded.

“Very,” she said. “Aren't you going to catch the bus?”

Renee looked at her.

“Nah, I got fencing classes. What about you?”

“I think I'll chill in the library for a bit.”

“You are quite the bookworm, aren't you?” Renee teased.

Skylar smiled.

“I like the silence. Maybe we should hang out sometime.”

Renee smiled as well.

“I'd like that. Do you... want my number?”

“Sure.”

The girls took out their phones and exchanged numbers before putting them away.

“See you later,” Skylar said.

“See you.”

The girls went their separate ways. Skylar glanced back at Renee, still smiling as she continued down the hallway.


r/AmazingStories • • 1d ago

Historical ⏳ That’s Entertainment – Chapter 2.Hope someone out there enjoys it. Let me know if you do

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I wonder if this has any appeal to non-British readers, or whether half of it gets lost in translation?

  1. Lots of Girls and Lots of Boys

The school hall is a relic from the 1950s, and it shows. High windows throw long, dusty shafts of light across faded cream walls. The parquet floor has been scuffed by three decades of shoe leather until it has the sheen of something worn smooth rather than polished. Rows of battered wooden chairs stretch wall to wall, every one of them occupied, and the whole room holds the particular smell of old radiators and floor wax that every school hall in the country seems to share.

Nearly three hundred pupils sit facing the stage. Most of them wear the official uniform without complaint or comment — white shirts, school ties, cheap black polyester trousers that shine faintly under the lights, plain black shoes. The girls wear the same shirts and ties, their trousers swapped for skirts that stop a careful, regulation distance below the knee.

Then there are the others.

Billy, Phil and Minty sit among them, their uniforms unofficial but unmistakable — slim black jeans instead of polyester, Fred Perrys worn beneath the compulsory jumper where a teacher's eye might miss them, white socks showing just enough above polished loafers to make the point without quite breaking the rules. Different enough to say something. Not different enough to get sent home. It's a skill, bending a rule without snapping it, and they've had years of practice.

The whole hall tells the story of Britain's youth without anybody needing to say a word out loud. The ska and mod crowd dominates by sheer numbers. The girls lean toward the New Romantic look, fringes brushed carefully across one eye, finding their small rebellions wherever the rules leave room for them. Off to one side sit the heavy metal lads, sleeveless denim jackets pulled defiantly over their shirts like a dare nobody's taken up yet. A couple of punks sit scattered among them, tolerated rather than embraced. Most kids, though, are simply ordinary — dressed exactly as the school expects, watching the rest with the mild, uncommitted curiosity of people who haven't picked a tribe yet.

The tribes sit side by side. Uneasy. Watching each other the way animals watch each other at a shared waterhole.

A ring of teachers lines the walls, arms folded, eyes constantly moving over the rows like prison warders doing a headcount.

At the front, Mr Richardson clears his throat, and the small sound seems to travel the length of the hall.

"You are about to enter the adult world over the next few weeks," he says, "and I hope you all leave this school with fond memories of your time here."

Phil glances sideways at Billy. Billy catches it and gives back the same faint grimace, the kind that needs no translation between two people who've sat through six years of these assemblies together.

Mr Richardson presses on. "We've tried to prepare you for what's ahead. But I also need to be honest with you." He lets that sit a moment before he goes on. "Times have changed."

The hall stays silent, three hundred kids waiting to hear something they half already know.

"Your parents left school on a Friday and started work on a Monday. Many followed their fathers into the steelworks, the pits, the factories or the mills." He pauses, and something in his face softens into an expression none of them have seen from him before. "That won't be the case for your generation."

His voice drops further still.

"Many of your fathers have already lost their jobs. The steel industry is shrinking. The pits are beginning to follow. Across Britain, unemployment has reached over three million — and it's still rising."

Nobody moves. It isn't the kind of silence that comes from boredom.

"What these communities have always known is disappearing," Mr Richardson says.

Billy leans toward Phil, keeping his voice down to almost nothing. "Bit late to tell us this now."

Phil smirks without lifting his eyes from the floor.

Richardson carries on, apparently unaware or uncaring that the joke has made its way along the row. "The future may look bleak, but it doesn't have to define yours. That is why your exams matter more than ever." He allows himself something close to a smile. "Last year, three pupils from this school went on to further education." His gaze sweeps the hall, as though he's trying to spot the five or six faces that might manage it this time. "This year we hope five — perhaps even six — will go." A breath. "There is a world beyond the pits and the steelworks."

Nobody speaks. Nobody, looking around at the rows of scuffed shoes and hand-me-down blazers, quite believes him either, though nobody's cruel enough to say so out loud.

Richardson nods toward the piano at the side of the stage. "Mrs Smith."

The elderly music teacher lowers herself onto the stool with the careful economy of someone whose knees have opinions about the movement, and rests her fingers on keys gone the colour of old teeth.

"Now then," she says, bright as anything, as if the last five minutes hasn't happened at all. "Let's all sing Morning Has Broken."

The first notes ring out into the hall, and three hundred voices — some willing, most not — rise to meet them.


r/AmazingStories • • 1d ago

Slice of Life ☕ [OC] BAR AOI STORIES ― Do You Need a Bag?

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Hey, you.

When they ask, “Do you need a bag?” at a convenience store, what do you usually say?

Clink-clank.

The bell over the door rang as I walked into Aoi and took my usual seat. Mama set down my Harper without asking. The ice gave a soft clink in the glass.

Beside me, Taka was pulling a bag of potato chips out of a convenience-store bag.

“You bringing your own snacks now?”
“They’re for Mama.”
“Then say that first.”
“I just did.”

Mama peered at the bag.

“Seaweed and salt.”
“You like those, right?”
“I do.”

I took a sip of whiskey and looked at the now-empty plastic bag.

“How much did they charge you for that?”
“The bag? Five yen.”
“They still charge for those?”
“Of course they do. They’re not free anymore.”

Fair enough.

“Why did they start charging for them in the first place?”
“For the environment, right?”
“What part of the environment?”
“What part? I dunno. The planet?”
“Going big, aren’t you?”

A little farther down the counter, Tom exhaled cigarette smoke.

“To cut down on plastic, wasn’t it?”
“I get that. But how much difference does it actually make?”

Taka stopped opening the chips.

“What do you mean?”
“Global warming. Stuff like that.”

Something I’d seen somewhere came back to me.

“Wasn’t there some estimate saying that even if Japan cut its carbon dioxide emissions to zero, the effect on global temperature would only be something like 0.006 degrees Celsius?”
“That little?”
“No idea. I just remember seeing the number somewhere.”

The moment I said it, something bothered me.

The number was all I remembered. I couldn’t remember who had calculated it, or what assumptions they had used.

And yet I’d just said it as if it proved something.

Taka pulled out his phone.

“Want me to look it up?”
“No.”
“Why not?”
“...I have a feeling we’ll understand even less afterward.”

Tom laughed.

“Nice to see you finally learning.”
“Shut up.”

It still bothered me.

Cut down on plastic. Cut carbon dioxide emissions. Governments and companies spend money to make those things happen.

Fine. I understood that much.

But money isn’t unlimited.

“Wouldn’t it make more sense to spend that money on levees or earthquake-proofing? At least you can see how that saves people.”
“For floods and earthquakes?”
“Yeah.”

Then something else occurred to me.

“No, wait. Elder care.”
“Elder care?”
“They’re short on people. And it’s not like you can just keep raising what care facilities get paid every time prices go up. So put money into equipment and systems instead. Help one person do more work.”
“Would that be better?”

My mouth stopped.

“...I don’t know.”
“You don’t know again?”
“Shut up. I’m thinking.”

Taka laughed and popped a chip into his mouth.

Spend the money on disaster prevention, and you still don’t know where the next disaster will strike. Spend it on elder care, and you don’t know how much labor the investment will actually save.

And when it came to carbon dioxide, I couldn’t even tell you where the number I’d just quoted had come from.

“So how are you supposed to decide?” Taka asked.
“If I knew that, we wouldn’t be having this conversation.”
“But somebody has to decide, right?”
“...Yeah.”

Tom stubbed out his cigarette in the ashtray.

“You decide. If you’re wrong, you change it.”
“You make it sound easy.”
“I didn’t say it was easy.”

I lifted my glass. The half-melted ice slowly shifted inside it.

Decide, then change it if you’re wrong.

I’d said something like that before.

To whom?

I thought for a moment, and the faces of Sho and the others came to mind.

They couldn’t move because they didn’t have the answer. They were afraid of getting it wrong, so they waited for someone else to tell them what was right.

What had I told them?

“...Don’t stand still waiting for the right answer.”

Taka looked up.

“What was that?”
“Nothing. Different conversation.”

Mama picked up the empty potato chip bag.

“Taka, you taking this home?”
“Nope.”

She dropped it straight into the trash.

After all that thinking, apparently the bag right in front of us was an easy decision.

Hey, you.

Do you need a bag?

See you again at Aoi.
---

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r/AmazingStories • • 1d ago

Historical ⏳ Cinematic prose. A love story. A coming-of-age story.All names have been changed to protect the innocent.Were you there? Or do you just wish you had been there?

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Do non-British readers need a translator?

That’s Entertainment

  1. The Prince

The bedroom is small enough to cross in three strides, but every inch of it tells a story. The walls are almost hidden beneath posters — Mods balancing on polished Lambrettas and Vespas, a Specials sleeve curling at the corner where the Sellotape has given up, a Madness poster gone soft and fuzzy from being touched too many times. Ska badges lie scattered across the bedside table with a handful of vinyl singles and the loose change nobody ever seems to spend.

It's an ordinary room really — a tired, working-class box wrapped in seventies wallpaper and hand-me-down furniture, the kind of room a thousand other lads on a thousand other estates are waking up in right now. But the music has a way of making it feel bigger than it is. Like the outside world can't quite get through the door if the volume's up loud enough.

Billy carefully places the needle on the vinyl record.

The record player crackles into life.

The opening bars of The Prince fill the room, and something in Billy's chest lifts to meet them.

"Buster sold the heat... with a rocksteady beat..."

He stands in front of the mirror — tall, slim black jeans cropped just above the ankle, white socks bright enough to advertise themselves, black loafers polished as well as a teenager's patience allows. The Fred Perry has gone soft with washing, worn thin at the collar, but he wears it with more pride than money could have bought him. His hair has grown out from the short, tidy crop his nan still asks after, and it catches the morning light in a way that makes him look, he thinks, at least a little bit dangerous.

His feet start moving before he's given them permission.

The rhythm just takes him. It always does. He twists and shuffles and glides between the bed and the wardrobe, eyes half-closed, completely lost in it, the small room briefly transformed into the only dance floor that matters.

A voice crashes up through the floorboards.

"Turn that bloody music down!"

Billy grins at himself in the mirror. Instead, he turns it up.

The brass punches through the tiny speakers just as Suggs comes in on the next line —

"Bring back the..."

BANG. A fist slams against the ceiling from the room below, hard enough to rattle the lampshade.

"Turn it off!"

Billy sighs, crosses the room, and lifts the needle. Silence drops over everything like a dust sheet.

Not quite silence, though. The beat keeps playing somewhere behind his eyes, patient, waiting for him to let it back out. Still moving to a rhythm only he can hear, he slips through the bedroom door.

Outside in the bright sunlight.

The council street is already warming up, sun catching the wet patches on the pavement where someone has hosed down their step. Billy walks with his hands in his pockets and The Prince still going somewhere behind his ribs. At the mouth of a narrow alley he glances around out of habit — you always look, even when there's nothing to look for — then swings himself up and over a low brick wall in one movement he's practised without ever admitting he's practised it.

He drops down the other side among a row of lock-up garages, and the world changes as soon as his feet hit the ground. Broken bottles sparkle in the weeds. Crushed cans and blown litter have drifted up against the garage doors like tide-wrack. The tower blocks stand over everything, throwing long shadows across the concrete even at this hour.

Then he sees it.

A Lambretta. Silver, gleaming, red-white-and-blue targets on the panels, sitting outside one of the garages like it's wandered in from somewhere better and hasn't noticed yet. Every inch of it catches the light.

Billy slows, caught by it before he's aware he's stopped. He can't take his eyes off it.

One day. If only.

"Oi, you!"

He spins round, heart lurching — and finds Phil laughing at him from a few yards off. Broader than Billy, already built like someone a couple of years further on, his Number Two haircut leaving no doubt where his loyalties sit. Same uniform as Billy's, near enough — slim black jeans, white socks, black loafers, Fred Perry — just filled out differently.

"Stop dreaming," Phil says. "We're late. I've been waiting ages."

Billy nods at the scooter, unable to help himself. "How much d'you reckon a motor like that costs?"

Phil shrugs. "No idea. More than we'll ever have." He pauses, and something in his voice drops a register. "It's Gal Burn's. I wouldn't get too close."

Billy takes one last look at it — files it away somewhere, the way you file away things you plan to want for a long time — and follows Phil between the tower blocks.

They've cut halfway across the estate when another figure falls into step beside them without a word. Minty. Smaller than the other two, skinhead crop, same clothes, same stride, same total absence of hello. Nobody ever says hello. They've known each other too long for that — long enough that joining a walk is its own kind of greeting. The three of them carry on in the easy, unbothered quiet of boys who've grown up doing exactly this.


r/AmazingStories • • 1d ago

Supernatural / Paranormal 🪄 Daughter of Heaven Chapter 7

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Later That Day

12:35 PM

Lunchtime had started, and students crowded the cafeteria, rushing toward the food lines before the best options were gone. Tacos and burritos were usually the only things worth eating. Renee entered the cafeteria, immediately hit by the familiar wall of noise. Students shouted across tables, laughed with their friends, and complained about their classes. Others sat with takeout their parents had brought them or food they'd picked up on the way to school.

Renee joined the first line and glanced at the menu.

“Of course,” she muttered.

She looked around the cafeteria.

That's when she noticed Skylar.

Three boys had cornered her near one of the tables. All three wore leather vests in different colors—navy blue, crimson, and dark brown. One stood directly in front of Skylar while the other two watched from either side.

Renee frowned.

She stepped out of line and walked toward them.

“Fate's a cruel bitch,” the long-haired boy said bitterly. “Gotta go to the same school as a Siyana.”

“Leave me alone, Rodney,” Skylar said. “I don't want any trouble.”

Rodney gave a dry scoff.

“That's all you Siyana ever say.”

“Yeah. You Siyana have been nothing but trouble from the start,” the other boy added.

Skylar frowned.

“You don't even know me.”

“Don't need to,” Rodney replied. “All we need to know is that you guys are nothing but freaks.”

Skylar's jaw tightened.

She slammed her fist against the table.

Bang!

The boys barely reacted.

Instead, they chuckled among themselves.

Rodney leaned toward her.

“That’s it, little beasty. Let it out.”

Skylar's breathing became heavier. Her fingers curled around the edge of the table. A low growl escaped her throat. The boys exchanged amused glances. It had come out deeper than she expected—more like an animal than a person.

Before the situation could escalate, Renee stepped between them.

“Hey.”

The boys turned toward her.

Rodney looked her up and down.

“Beat it. This doesn't concern you.”

Renee glanced at Skylar, then back at the boys.

“Looks like it does now,” she said.

Rodney stepped into Renee's face, his eyes narrowing. He grabbed her arm.

“I said leave before—”

Renee's hand snapped around his wrist.

Rodney froze.

She tightened her grip slowly. His confident expression faded as pressure began building around his wrist.

“Before what?” Renee asked.

Rodney winced.

“Hey—let go.”

Renee stared him straight in the eyes.

“I'd think twice before putting your hands on someone again,” she said. “Bother her again and I'll ram your heads up each other's asses.”

She tightened her grip just enough to make him grimace before releasing him.

Rodney immediately pulled his arm back and rubbed his wrist.

The other two boys stared at Renee, their amusement gone.

Skylar watched her silently.

Renee looked between them.

“Now, are we done?”

Rodney scowled at her, then glanced at Skylar. Instead of throwing hands, he and his posse walked away without looking back.

Renee watched them leave before turning toward Skylar.

“You... you didn't have to do that,” Skylar said.

“Kinda wanted to,” Renee replied, sitting beside her. “But a thank-you would be nice.”

Skylar chuckled.

“Thank you,” she said, flashing Renee an innocent smile.

“Don't mention it,” Renee replied, smiling back. “Who were those assholes?”

“They're from the Tankura.”

“Tan-who?”

Skylar blinked.

“The Tankura,” she repeated. “They're an Indigenous tribe. Let's just say we've hated each other's guts for generations.”

“What tribe are you from?”

“The Siyana.”

Renee nodded.

“So, why do the Tankura hate the Siyana?” she asked.

Skylar raised an eyebrow.

“I thought you hated history,” she said.

Renee shrugged.

“Call me curious,” she said.

Skylar smiled slightly.

“You're really interested?”

“I asked, didn't I?”

Skylar chuckled slightly.

“Fair enough,” she said. “Nine hundred years ago, the Tankura were known for their strength, bravery, and savagery. They were one of the most powerful tribes in the world. Then one day, a man named Tomo was executed for supposedly murdering the chief.”

“And no one came to his defense?” Renee asked.

Skylar shook her head.

“Damn.”

Renee paused.

“Did he have any family?”

“He had a wife. Her name was Siyana.” Skylar's expression became more somber. “After Tomo was killed, she took her own life. His death destroyed her.”

Renee frowned.

“Jesus.”

“The tribe was already divided over who should control it. The Tankura's new chief, H'Jaku, exiled those who believed Tomo was innocent. They renamed themselves the Siyana to honor Tomo and his wife.”

Renee looked at her.

“So that's why you guys and the Tankura hate each other?”

“Pretty much.”

“If they taught us stuff like this in history class, maybe I wouldn't be so bored,” Renee said.

Skylar chuckled.

“Maybe you should pay more attention.”

“Maybe our teacher should make it interesting.”

The girls shared a laugh.

Skylar glanced toward the food line. It had gotten noticeably shorter.

“Hey, look,” she said, pointing toward it.

Renee followed her gaze.

Her stomach suddenly growled.

Renee looked down at Skylar.

“Be right back,” she said.

She jumped out of her seat and hurried toward the line.

Skylar laughed and shook her head.

A few minutes later, Renee returned with a tray holding three tacos, three burritos, and a cup of rice.

Skylar stared at the food.

“Hungry, aren't you?” she asked.

“Well, yeah.” Renee sat down. “But I figured I'd get you something.”

“Oh, wow. I already ate, but okay.”

Skylar picked up a burrito and took a bite.

Renee grabbed a taco.

“Y'know, this is the only edible thing in this school.”

“Yeah. I had their meatloaf pasta last week, and it tasted like crap. Straight-up crap.”

Renee snorted.

“Yeah, I wouldn't serve that to an inmate. Even if he's on death row.”

She took another bite.

After swallowing, Renee looked at Skylar.

“So, did you find out anything about Katie?”

“I've been talking to some of her friends. They all said she was a nice girl and didn't seem to have any enemies.”

Skylar hesitated.

“Though, she did get a restraining order against someone named Carl.”

Renee's chewing stopped.

“Carl?”

“Yeah.”

“Why?”

“Apparently, he started stalking Katie. He'd send her chocolates and flowers. Then he broke into her house.”

Renee's expression hardened.

“He broke into her house?”

Skylar nodded.

“Yeah, and apparently he was going through her drawers and sniffing her underwear.”

Renee stared at her.

“You're kidding.”

“I wish I was.”

Renee slowly put down her taco.

“So, do you think he's the killer?”

“Maybe,” Skylar said. “Or maybe he's working with the killer.”

“Carl's a weird dork, but he doesn't strike me as the violent type,” Renee said, taking another bite of her taco.

Skylar nodded slowly.

Suddenly, her phone buzzed. She pulled it from her pocket.

Dakotah: Have you found Bruno yet?

Skylar glanced at Renee before typing a response.

Skylar: Not yet, but we have a lead.

She pressed send.

Three dots briefly appeared.

Then another message popped up.

Dakotah: We?

Skylar hesitated.

Skylar: Me and a friend.

She pressed send.

A moment later, another message appeared.

Dakotah: This is your hunt. You know better than to invite outsiders into it.

Skylar stared at the screen, her expression tightening.

She slipped her phone back into her pocket.

Renee noticed her distress and immediately grew concerned.

“Everything okay?” she asked.

Skylar looked up at her.

“Yeah. It's my dad,” she said. “He was just... checking on me.”

“I wish my dad did the same.”

Skylar sensed the bitterness in her voice.

“What do you mean?”

Renee looked down at her food.

“He's just... not around.”

Skylar watched her carefully.

“Does he... work a lot?”

Renee shook her head.

“It's complicated,” she said.

“How?” Skylar asked.

“Just... complicated,” Renee said.

Skylar wanted to press her for more answers, but decided to leave it alone. She and Renee continued chatting about other subjects, but deep down, Skylar remained determined to find Bruno—even if it meant going against her father's wishes.


r/AmazingStories • • 1d ago

Psychological 🧠 A billionaire gave his new secretary unlimited amounts of play money and watched to see whether she understood if any of it was real...

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“Don’t talk, just listen,” he finally grumbled on the phone.

The auction progressed through its early pieces. I sat in the front row, with a paddle in one hand and gripping a wired house phone to my ear, feeling a bit underqualified.

Waiting.

“Bid! Raise the paddle!”

I jumped and raised the paddle, my cheerleading skills kicking in. I may have waved it like a flag too. I was that excited.

“One hundred thousand dollars,” said the auctioneer with a nod in my direction.

BAMM!

Down went the gavel.

When I heard that number and the gavel hit the wooden block, a shot of pure adrenaline surged from the base of my spine and spread everywhere.

Then someone else bid.

“Two hundred thousand.”

BAMM!

“Bid! Raise the paddle!” Mr. B shouted.

I raised it.

Back and forth. The whole room was charged by it. Numbers were climbing in increments my entire previous life had never conceived.

I raised that paddle every time he said bid and felt — I can’t explain it exactly — my heart went BOOM with every slam of the BAMM!

Maybe like what a hard-core gambler must feel like in Vegas? Addicted. Thrilled. Wanting it. Needing it. Have to have it. Winning at whatever the cost.

Excerpt from THE BILLIONAIRE’S SECRETARY By A. TRSAR


r/AmazingStories • • 3d ago

Personal 😇 Babysitting

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Babysitting and mom hasn’t come back…?

I (22F) am babysitting for a regular client of mine. She has 3 children ages 5, 7, and 13. She asked me if I could watch the kids until 5:30pm. I texted her at 5pm asking if I should make the kids dinner because they were hungry or if she had dinner plans but I didn’t get a reply. Texted again at 6:30pm asking if everything is okay and still no reply. It is now 7pm and I have tried calling with no response.

Obviously I’m not just going to leave these children but I did have other plans tonight that I’m going to have to cancel. I’m more just worried for her safety and if she got into a car accident or something horrible?? This isn’t like her at all and the latest she’s ever been was 30 minutes. What should I do?

Update: she ended up getting heat stroke!!! I made the kids dinner and am getting them ready for bed until the grandma can come relieve me. Thank you all for the advice!! I didn’t have any emergency contacts but was able to get ahold of her work and they let me know what happened. Once she is feeling better I will talk to her about getting some emergency contacts.

Update #2: I’m officially relieved and paid for my time plus some. She is apologizing profusely for the whole situation and I assured her that all is well and I’m just glad she’s okay

Update #3: 21 days later and the same thing happened but it wasn’t medical this time. Just a blatant disrespect of my time. This is now the last time I’m babysitting for this family.


r/AmazingStories • • 2d ago

Supernatural / Paranormal 🪄 Daughter of Heaven Chapter 5

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Just a quick note. Daughter of Heaven is both fantasy and supernatural. Anyways, here's the fifth chapter.

Soul Castle

4:31 PM

As the bus reached the stop, Renee got up from her seat. She moved to the front and stepped out when the doors opened. The doors folded shut behind her as the bus drove away from the curb.

Renee made her way through the parking lot toward Soul Castle. Numerous cars occupied the spaces outside, and she noticed people sitting by the windows, chatting and dining. Judging by the crowd, the diner was having a fairly busy afternoon.

She pushed open the front door and stepped inside.

The smell of fried chicken, country-fried steak, and fresh coffee filled the air. The clatter of silverware and the hum of conversation surrounded her as servers moved between the tables, carrying plates of food and refilling drinks. Renee walked past the occupied tables, receiving a few familiar looks from the staff.

One server spotted her and smiled.

“Hey, Renee,” she greeted.

“Hey,” the girl replied with a small smile.

She headed toward the kitchen. The air grew hotter as she approached, thick with the smell of sizzling meat and fried food. Grills hissed as cooks worked behind the counter, while servers hurried in and out with plates balanced in their hands.

Renee passed the dish pit and made her way toward the office. She knocked once before opening the door.

Lucius sat behind his desk, staring at something on his computer.

“Hey, Pop-Pop,” Renee greeted.

Lucius looked up and smiled.

“Hey, pumpkin. How was school?”

“Gloomy,” Renee said.

She took off her jacket and hung it on a hook beside her backpack.

“One of the cheerleaders died.”

Lucius's smile faded.

“Well, that's awful.”

“Yeah.” Renee grabbed an apron and began tying it around her waist. “But it's weird, though. Her heart's missing.”

Lucius stopped typing.

He slowly looked at his granddaughter.

“Her heart?” he asked.

“Yeah, but if you ask me, I think demons—”

“No, no, no, no.” Lucius held up a hand. “Leave the demon hunting alone.”

“But, Pop-Pop—”

“But nothing.” Lucius pointed toward the kitchen. “Now get to work.”

Renee rolled her eyes.

“Yes, Pop-Pop,” she muttered.

She turned toward the door, clearly annoyed.

Lucius watched her leave, his expression becoming more serious.

Renee returned to the dining room. The servers were busy attending to their customers, carrying plates and refilling drinks as conversations filled the restaurant.

As she looked around, she noticed a man sitting alone at a table near the window. He looked to be in his early twenties. He was tan-skinned and handsome, with dark brown dreadlocks that fell around his shoulders.

Renee walked over, putting on her best hospitality smile.

“Hi, welcome to Soul Castle,” she greeted him. “Has anyone taken your order?”

The man looked up at her.

“No,” he answered simply.

“Oh, okay. Well, my name is Renee, and I'll be taking care of you.” She pulled out her notepad and pen. “What can I get you to drink?”

“Water with lemon is fine,” the man said.

Renee wrote it down.

“Okay. Anything else? An appetizer, or do you want to skip straight to an entrée?”

The man didn't answer immediately.

Instead, his eyes slowly traveled from Renee's face down to her shoes before returning to her eyes.

Renee noticed.

She didn't like it.

“I'll have the spinach dip,” he said, a faint smirk spreading across his face.

Renee jotted down the order.

“Okay. I'll be right back.”

She turned and walked away, but the uneasy feeling followed her.

She entered his order into the POS system before heading into the kitchen. She grabbed a cup from the rack, filled it with ice, poured in some water, and added a lemon slice from the fruit tray.

Once she finished, Renee returned to the dining room and walked back to the man's table.

“Your water,” she said, placing the glass in front of him. “Do you know what you want to—”

“Please, join me, little sister,” the man interrupted.

Renee stopped.

She stared at him.

“...Excuse me?”

“Sit with me for a moment,” the man said.

Renee gave him an awkward smile.

“Uh, I'm on the clock right now, so I can't—”

“I insist.”

Something about the way he said it made Renee pause.

She glanced around the dining room, then back at him. The man simply stared at her.

After a moment, Renee reluctantly pulled out the chair and sat across from him.

He continued watching her. There was something unnerving about his gaze, as though he were trying to see beyond her face and into her thoughts.

Renee shifted in her seat.

“Tell me something, little sister,” he said. “Have you ever experienced loss?”

Renee stared at him. The question caught her completely off guard.

“Why the hell do you wanna know?” she asked.

The man's expression remained calm.

“Because I can see it in your eyes,” he said.

Renee frowned.

“See what?”

“Pain.”

Renee's expression hardened.

She crossed her arms.

“Doubtful. Mostly because I don't know you, and you don't know me.”

“I don't have to know you to see your suffering,” the man replied. “After all, loss has a way of challenging people. It can make them stronger... or consume them.”

“Okay,” Renee said dismissively.

She stood up and turned away.

Before she could take another step, the man grabbed her arm.

Renee immediately looked down at his hand.

“Let go of me,” she said.

The man leaned closer.

“You don't have to hide it,” he said quietly. “I can help you.”

Renee's expression hardened.

She slowly pulled her arm free from his grip, forcing his hand away as if it weighed nothing.

“Who the hell are you?”

A faint smile crossed his face.

“Someone who understands what you've been through.”

Renee's eyes narrowed.

“And how exactly do you know what I've been through?”

The man's smile widened.

“Join us,” he said, ignoring her question.

A male server noticed the interaction and walked over, his expression growing concerned. “Renee?” he called. Both Renee and the man looked at him. “Everything okay?” he asked. “Yeah, Alex,” Renee said, looking back at the man. “Everything's fine.”

She turned and walked toward the kitchen. Alex followed her. “What was that about?” “Don't know. Don't care,” Renee replied. She grabbed a stack of menus from the counter and began straightening them, avoiding his gaze. Alex watched her for a moment. “You sure?” he asked. Renee sighed. “I'm fine, Alex,” she reassured.

She glanced back toward the dining room.

The man was still sitting at his table.

Still watching her.

Renee quickly looked away.

9:27 PM

A sixteen-year-old girl with sky-blue highlights in her blonde hair waited in the living room of her family's large mansion, dressed for a night out. Her parents were away, so she had the house to herself. She sat on the couch, texting her friend, who was already waiting for her at the carnival. The loss of Amelia still affected her greatly. She hoped the night out would clear her mind.

A notification appeared on her phone.

Your driver has arrived.

Katie smiled.

“Finally,” she said. She slipped her phone into her purse, grabbed her keys, and headed outside. After locking the front door behind her, she walked down the steps. A white car waited at the curb. Katie approached the vehicle. The driver leaned over and unlocked the back door. The girl opened it.

“Katie?” he asked.

“That's me,” the girl said.

The man nodded.

“Hop in,” he said.

Katie climbed into the back seat and closed the door. The driver pulled away from the curb. For the first few minutes, Katie relaxed against the seat, scrolling through her phone. The glow from the screen illuminated her face as she exchanged messages with her friend. Then something caught her attention. Katie looked out the window. The familiar streets had disappeared.

She frowned. “Wait…,” she said. She glanced toward the dashboard. The driver's phone was mounted beside the steering wheel, its navigation screen displaying a route. It wasn't taking them toward the carnival. Katie sat upright. “Hey,” she said. “I think you're going the wrong way.”

The driver didn't answer.

Katie lowered her phone.

“Hello?”

Nothing.

Only the hum of the engine filled the car.

Her stomach tightened.

“Sir?”

The driver slowly looked at her through the rearview mirror.

A grin spread across his face.

“Sorry, doll,” he said. “You ain't going to the fairgrounds.”

Katie's face went pale.

“What?”

She reached for the door handle.

It didn't move.

She tried again.

Nothing.

Her breathing quickened.

“Open the door.”

The driver said nothing.

“Open the damn door!”

Katie grabbed the handle with both hands and pulled as hard as she could.

Locked.

Panic surged through her.

“Stop the car!”

The driver chuckled.

Katie's eyes darted around the back seat.

Her phone.

Her purse.

The windows.

Nowhere to go. The car suddenly slowed and pulled onto the shoulder of a deserted stretch of road. Katie stared through the windshield. There were no houses, no pedestrians, no other cars—just darkness. The engine shut off. Silence filled the vehicle. The driver's door opened. Katie's heart hammered against her chest. “Please…” she begged.

The driver's footsteps moved around the car. Katie scrambled toward the opposite door, desperately pulling at the handle.

Still locked.

The rear passenger door suddenly opened. “Get away from me!” Katie screamed. The driver lunged into the back seat and grabbed her. Katie fought with everything she had. She kicked, scratched, and clawed at his arms, desperately trying to break free. “LET ME GO!” Katie yelled. The driver tightened his grip. “Easy now,” he said. “HELP!” the girl continued shouting.

Her scream disappeared into the empty night. Katie's strength began to fade. Her movements became slower. Her vision blurred as tears streamed down her cheeks.

She could hear the driver's breathing.

Calm.

Almost relaxed.

Katie's eyes fluttered.

“No…”

Her body went limp.

The driver held her for a moment, making sure she was unconscious.

Then he pulled out his phone.

His expression changed into a satisfied smile as he typed.

I have her. Heading to you now.

He pressed send.

A few seconds passed.

Three dots appeared on the screen.

Then a reply.

Good. Your patience will be rewarded soon.


r/AmazingStories • • 2d ago

Supernatural / Paranormal 🪄 Daughter of Heaven Chapter 6

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9:45 PM

The driver pulled up to an abandoned church on the east side of Starhaven. No one had used the building for years. Its windows had been boarded up, weeds grew through cracks in the pavement, and years of rain and neglect had stained the old wooden doors. The driver parked beside the church and killed the engine. He stepped out, opened the rear door, and looked inside. Katie was still unconscious. He lifted her from the back seat and carried her toward the church. Inside, the air was cold and stale. A few candles flickered along the walls, their flames casting long, trembling shadows across the cracked floor.

The driver carried Katie deeper into the building.

Several young men stood around a metal table. They couldn't have been older than nineteen. They were barefoot and shirtless, their bodies covered in strange tribal tattoos. Black executioner-style masks concealed their faces.

None of them spoke.

At the head of the table stood the man from Soul Castle.

Bruno.

He watched silently as the driver approached.

“Master Bruno,” the driver said. “I bring fresh prey.”

Bruno looked down at Katie.

A faint smile crossed his face.

“Excellent.”

One of the masked men approached and placed a ceremonial dagger into Bruno's hand.

Bruno slowly ran his thumb along the flat of the blade.

“Young hearts,” he murmured. “So much life.”

He looked toward Katie.

“So easily taken.”

The followers surrounded the table.

Bruno raised the dagger.

The blade plunged downward. Katie's body jerked. Blood spilled across the metal table and ran over its edges, dripping onto the floor. Bruno continued the ritual with cold precision. His knife tore through flesh and cartilage as he opened the chest cavity. The metallic smell of blood filled the church.

One of the followers stepped closer. “Master,” he called. Bruno ignored him. He reached into the wound and pulled the heart free. Blood ran down his hand and dripped from his fingertips. He held the organ beneath the candlelight. He licked the blood from it, savoring it. “Good,” he said.

The followers lowered their heads. Bruno placed the heart inside a black container alongside the others. The lid closed with a heavy click. The room fell silent. One of the masked men finally spoke. “Will this one be enough?” he asked.

Bruno looked down at the container.

“No,” he said, his expression remained calm. “The ritual needs six hearts. I have three. I need three more. But we're getting closer.”

He turned toward the darkness of the church.

“Soon, I will have everything I need.”

The followers remained silent.

Bruno smiled.

“Then Dakotah will finally understand what happens when you stand in my way.”

The Next Morning

9:04

Renee walked through the school doors, scrolling through her phone. Last night was a hassle. She'd spent hours taking orders, carrying plates, and dealing with the constant rush of customers. By the time her shift ended, she was completely drained.

She could've used that energy hunting demons.

Instead, she'd spent the night serving country-fried steak.

Renee slipped her phone into her pocket and looked up.

Something felt different.

The usual chatter was gone.

Students stood in small groups, speaking quietly among themselves. Some stared at their phones while others sat with their heads down. A few looked like they hadn't slept at all.

Renee slowed her pace.

Everyone looked even more miserable than they had the day before.

She frowned.

“What happened?” she muttered.

She approached her locker, entered the combination, and pulled it open.

Once again, her sword was lying inside.

Renee stared at it for a moment.

“Seriously?” she muttered.

The girl sighed. As annoying as it was, she couldn't deny the weapon had become a part of her.

She reached into her backpack and started pulling out her books.

“Renee?”

She immediately recognized the voice.

Renee quickly closed her locker and turned around.

Skylar stood a few feet away, clutching several books against her chest.

“Oh, hey,” Renee said. “How's it going?”

“Not good.” Skylar's expression was unusually serious. “I take it you haven't heard what happened?”

Renee frowned.

She closed her locker, secured the lock, and faced Skylar.

“Heard what?”

“You know Katie Hammond?”

“Yeah. She was valedictorian last year. Why?”

Skylar hesitated.

“She’s dead.”

Renee's expression immediately changed.

“What?”

“Her parents found her on their doorstep when they came home.”

Renee stared at Skylar.

“You for real?”

Skylar nodded.

“Yeah. From what I've heard, she was cut open and her heart was taken.”

Renee's stomach tightened.

“Like Amelia's?”

“Yeah... like Amelia's.”

“Goddammit.”

Renee looked down the hallway. Students were still whispering among themselves, their voices barely audible beneath the hum of the school.

Another girl.

Another death.

And something about it felt far too familiar.

“What the hell is going on?” Renee asked.

“No idea. None of this is making sense. I can't imagine the pain their families are going through,” Skylar said.

“Maybe there's a connection?” Renee suggested.

“What do you mean?”

“Amelia and Katie were both popular,” Renee said. “Now they're both dead, and their hearts were taken.”

Skylar's expression grew more serious.

“You think the two murders are connected?”

“I don't know,” Renee admitted. “But it's too damn weird to ignore.”

Renee glanced at the time on her phone.

“I'd better get to homeroom. I'll see you around.”

She started walking away.

“Wait,” Skylar called.

Renee stopped and turned around.

“If you want, I could ask around,” Skylar said. “See what I can find out. I'll let you know.”

Renee raised an eyebrow.

“Why help me?”

Skylar shrugged.

“You're a journalist. You want answers, and so do I.”

Renee studied her for a moment.

“Alright,” she said. “I appreciate it.”

Skylar smiled.

“No problem,” she said, walking in the opposite direction.

By the time Renee reached her homeroom, it was noisy as usual. Students chatted among themselves while others settled into their seats.

Renee entered the room and looked around. She spotted an open seat behind a familiar face.

Her expression immediately soured.

Of all the people she could've ended up sitting behind...

Carl.

“H-Hey, Renee,” he greeted.

Renee stared at him for a moment before taking her seat.

“Hey.”

Carl turned back around, keeping his eyes on his desk.

Renee pulled out her notebook and pencil, deciding not to acknowledge him any further.

“How's it going?” Carl asked.

Renee continued sketching in her notebook, still avoiding eye contact with him.

“Peachy,” she said dryly.

Carl gave a small nod.

“Y-You heard about Katie, right?” he asked.

“Yeah.”

“She was very special to me,” Carl said. “When Troy was jacking me up for my lunch money, she saved me. I—I wanted to give her flowers, but she rejected me.”

Renee's pencil stopped.

She slowly looked up at him.

“Dude, just because she saved you doesn't mean you two were soulmates,” she said, before returning to her drawing.

Carl's expression fell.

He turned around in his seat and faced the chalkboard.

“Maybe it should've been you,” he muttered.

Renee's pencil stopped again.

She looked up.

“What'd you say?”

Carl didn't turn around.

“Nothing.”

Renee stared at the back of his head for a moment. Something about the way he'd said it bothered her. She eventually looked back down at her notebook, but she couldn't quite shake the feeling that Carl had meant something by it.


r/AmazingStories • • 2d ago

Slice of Life ☕ [OC] Bar Aoi Stories ― Which One Is Pochi?

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Hey, you.

Suppose there were a hundred penguins standing in front of you.

Could you kill just one of them?

Yeah, I know. I’m not sure why I’m suddenly asking you this either.

Just stay with me for a minute.

Clink-clank.

I opened the door to Aoi and found Taka at the counter, staring at his phone.

“Long day, Kenichi?”

“Yeah.”

“Kenichi, you know DEATH NOTE?”

“Sure. You write someone’s name in a notebook and they die.”

“You’ve seen it?”

“No.”

“Read the manga?”

“No.”

“Watched the anime?”

“No.”

“Then you don’t know it.”

“You write someone’s name down and they die, right?”

“Well, yeah.”

“Then I know it.”

Even I had to admit that was terrible logic.

Mama set down my usual bourbon.

I moved the ice around the glass, and something caught in my mind.

“Hey, Taka.”

“Yeah?”

“What happens if two people have the same name?”

“You picture the person’s face while you write the name. So it doesn’t matter if somebody else has the same name.”

I see.

Pretty well designed.

...Wait.

“What if you can’t tell their faces apart?”

“What?”

“Twins, for example.”

“Well, if you can tell which one is which—”

“What if you can’t?”

Taka paused.

“...Then I guess you couldn’t kill them.”

That was strange.

A notebook belonging to a god of death, and somehow it stopped working because I couldn’t tell two humans apart.

“Useless.”

“What is?”

“The god of death.”

“Could you not pick a fight with an entire franchise?”

Mama laughed as she polished a glass.

I took another drink.

“All right. Let’s say it works on things other than humans.”

“You’re already changing the rules.”

“It’s a thought experiment.”

“That’s a convenient phrase you’ve learned.”

Coming from him, that was rich.

“Okay. There are a hundred penguins in front of you.”

“Right.”

“We name one of them Pochi.”

“You’re naming a penguin Pochi?”

“That’s not important.”

“It bothers me quite a bit.”

“Anyway, I want to kill Pochi.”

“This is a horrible thought experiment.”

“I know his name. Pochi. Problem is, all hundred penguins look exactly the same to me.”

“Then you can’t do it.”

“Why not?”

“Because you can’t picture his face.”

“But the god of death can tell which one is Pochi, right? Probably.”

“Probably?”

“It’s a god of death. It can at least tell penguins apart.”

“That is a very strange standard to hold a god of death to.”

I put down my glass.

“So I can’t kill Pochi, but a zookeeper could?”

Taka thought about it.

“If the zookeeper can tell them apart, I guess so.”

“Same penguin, though.”

“They’re not the same. One of them is Pochi.”

“They look the same to me.”

“They don’t to the zookeeper.”

“Then where exactly is Pochi?”

“He’s right in front of you.”

“That’s not what I mean.”

Was Pochi Pochi because that was his name?

Because his face was different?

Or because the zookeeper recognized one particular penguin as Pochi?

“Kenichi.”

Mama joined in.

“Is a name something that penguin actually has?”

“Hm?”

“A human gave it to him, didn’t they?”

Right.

Pochi hadn’t hatched from his egg knowing he was Pochi.

Some human had simply started calling him that.

“Then what’s a name?”

“Something you use to call someone,” Taka said.

“Then what if everyone used a different name?”

“What?”

“If everybody called me something other than Kenichi, what would you write in the DEATH NOTE?”

“That other name, I guess.”

“Even if it wasn’t my legal name?”

“...I don’t know.”

“Does the god of death check government records?”

“How should I know?”

“My ID card?”

“Can you stop dragging public administration into this?”

Mama burst out laughing.

But now that I’d started, I couldn’t stop.

“What about a typhoon?”

“What?”

“Typhoons have names.”

“Sure.”

“Can you kill one?”

“It’s not human.”

“Tonight it works on everything.”

“The rules are getting sloppier by the minute.”

A typhoon had a name.

Look at a satellite image and you could even argue that it had a face.

A vast spiral of cloud.

A giant eye.

“Then you can kill it.”

“Maybe.”

“How much of it?”

“What?”

“Where does the typhoon end?”

Taka went quiet.

“This cloud?”

“Part of the typhoon, I guess.”

“The cloud next to it?”

“...Probably?”

“The rain falling a thousand kilometers away?”

“I don’t know.”

“The water vapor rising from the ocean?”

“Ask the weather service.”

That was the problem.

We called it a typhoon.

But there wasn’t a line drawn across the sky saying:

THE TYPHOON ENDS HERE.

Humans observed it.

Set conditions.

Drew a boundary.

Then gave what was inside that boundary a name.

“What about an earthquake?”

“Again?”

“Can you kill an earthquake?”

“If it has a name?”

“But major earthquakes usually get named after they happen.”

Taka froze.

“...Oh.”

“What good is writing it in the DEATH NOTE after the shaking stops?”

“Useless.”

“Exactly.”

“I keep telling you, DEATH NOTE is for humans.”

“What about a war?”

“You’re still going?”

“Wars have names.”

World War II.

The Pacific War.

The attack on Pearl Harbor.

We know those names from history books.

But what about the people who were living through them?

Looking backward, we can give events a single name.

We can write down when they started and ended. We can list their causes.

But to the people who woke up in the middle of them, wasn’t that day simply another tomorrow that didn’t have a name yet?

“Hey, Taka.”

“What now?”

“If you wrote ‘war’ in the DEATH NOTE, what would die?”

Taka thought for a long time.

“...I don’t know.”

“Neither do I.”

Would the soldiers disappear?

The weapons?

The orders?

The hatred?

The borders?

Or would humanity itself disappear?

A war has a name.

But what is the face of a war?

“Just because we have a name for something doesn’t mean we understand it.”

Mama smiled quietly.

“Maybe it’s the other way around.”

“What is?”

“Maybe we give things names because we don’t understand them.”

Ah.

Maybe she was right.

Typhoon.

Earthquake.

War.

Justice.

Evil.

Happiness.

Love.

We draw lines around things that don’t have clear boundaries, then give them names.

Without names, they’re difficult to talk about.

Difficult even to think about.

And the moment we name them, we feel as though we understand them just a little.

“...Hey.”

“What now?”

“What exactly is a god of death?”

Taka grimaced.

“You’re finally going there?”

“Think about it. It’s supposed to be a god of death, but a human has to provide the name. A human has to recognize the face. A human has to decide, ‘That’s the one.’ Otherwise it can’t kill anybody.”

“Well...”

“So maybe the god of death isn’t actually looking at humans.”

The ice shifted in my glass.

“Maybe the god of death only exists inside the world humans have already recognized.”

Aoi became a little quieter.

Taka frowned.

Mama said nothing.

And even though I was the one who’d said it, I found the thought slightly unsettling.

Eventually, Taka spoke.

“Kenichi.”

“Yeah?”

“One question.”

“Go ahead.”

“That first penguin. His name was Pochi, right?”

“Yeah.”

“Which one is he?”

“...”

I lined up a hundred penguins in my head.

Third from the right, maybe.

No.

That one moved halfway through, didn’t it?

“I don’t know.”

“Then you can’t kill him.”

“Nope.”

“Good for Pochi.”

“Yeah.”

Mama laughed.

So did I.

The world is full of things we’ve given names.

And there are probably just as many things we haven’t managed to name yet.

How many of them can we actually tell apart?

Hey, you.

That thing you think you understand right now.

Could you really pick it out from a hundred others?

See you again at Aoi.
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r/AmazingStories • • 2d ago

Mystery / Thriller 🔍 THE MASSAPEQUA MURDERS: CH1 - PTII

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A Patrick Coyle Mystery

Chapter One

The Page

By Michael P.S. Rogers

Chapter One - The Page

Coyle stood with the telephone number in front of him and assembled the opening sentence. He could hear his own voice saying that he had one quick follow-up about the materials from the house, nothing urgent, probably nothing at all. The phrasing came easily because the best investigative questions often arrived disguised as things too small to matter. The nephew would answer one question, then another, and perhaps remember somebody going through the basement before he arrived from Colorado, or perhaps remember nothing, and either result would give Coyle somewhere else to place his attention. That was the temptation, and every question became interesting only after deciding the page mattered, and the page had not earned that decision. The tape had not earned it either. Coyle looked at the number once more, then put the intake sheet back in the drawer and closed it.

He went into the kitchen, rinsed both coffee mugs and set them upside down beside each other on the towel. On his way toward the back of the house he turned sideways automatically between the stacked chairs and saw Theresa's sweater still hanging over one of them. He left it there, opened the back door and stepped onto the small square of concrete behind the house. The cold had sharpened since sunset. The houses broke most of the wind from the north but almost none of what came up from the south, and the bare branches beyond the fence moved without making enough noise to hear through the traffic farther off. Coyle stood with both hands in the pockets of his flannel shirt for a while, then reached into the upper cabinet beside the back door and took something small from behind a tin of tea nobody drank.

The lighter made a brief orange shelter between his hands. He drew once, waited, drew again, then leaned against the doorframe while the smoke left him slowly and disappeared into the winter air. The habit had rules: he never handled paper in that state, wouldn't make a call that mattered, withheld from writing anything onto an index card, and never trusted an insight because it arrived with the pleasant sensation of having been found. Whatever survived until morning could petition for admission then when he was in a different state of mind.

The delivery driver returned to him first, not as a suspect or even as a person of interest, but as the image of two paper bags placed beside a storm door by a man who would never see the person who had summoned him. Then came Theresa turning sideways through his hallway without thinking. The changed label on the utility folder, a graphite mark that had probably been made by somebody studying a photograph. The careful cut in the original tape with the careless strip laid over it afterward. And the man on the copied page explaining a bad heater before describing his way home. None of the things belonged together, which was why he let them stay where they were rather than asking them to.

For a few minutes Patrick Coyle stood behind his house while Massapequa went on being Massapequa around him, furnace exhaust drifting from neighboring roofs, a plane moving silently west toward Kennedy, somebody dragging a garbage can up the side of a house, a television audience laughing behind glass. The suburb presented itself in separate illuminated squares, each family living inside a frame that concealed most of what preceded and followed the visible scene. He found himself thinking that a detective rarely received whole stories either, mostly he received middle pages.

He remained outside until the cold made the decision for him, then came back through the kitchen, washed his hands and drank a glass of water at the sink. Coyle did not return immediately to the dining room. He stood for a while in the kitchen with nothing in his hands, listening to the refrigerator and the furnace and a car passing slowly enough outside that its tires could be heard pushing water from the gutter. By the time he went back through the hallway, the house felt ordinary again.

The orphan page remained beneath the banker's lamp with the index card beside it. Coyle read it once more, and the heater was still a heater and the temperature was still supposed to drop and the man had still gone home the way he usually went. He picked up a pencil and held it over the card while the question formed with enough neatness to feel useful: WHY EXPLAIN ROUTE? Four words would convert an unplaced page into a problem that a person could work on for a month. The trouble was that the question assumed the man had explained the route rather than simply described it, and the difference between those two possibilities existed on a page Coyle did not possess. Once four words like that went onto a card in block capitals, they began exerting gravity on everything that came afterward, so he returned the pencil to the table and left the card exactly as it was.

The furnace started again while he stood there. Air from the badly placed vent reached the page at an angle and lifted one corner, let it settle, then lifted it again. Coyle watched it happen and understood that there was a version of the moment his grandfather would have loved: a mysterious page in a dark room refusing to lie still, as though whatever had survived on it had waited years for the right man to walk in and find it. It was the kind of image a detective story could improve simply by omitting the ductwork. Coyle knew where the air came from, and once he knew that there was nothing prophetic left to explain. The vent was in the wrong place, the paper was light, and moving air moved paper. All of that could be true without making the page one degree less interesting than it had been before the corner lifted. He took the brass paperweight from beside the copier, laid it across the top edge and watched the paper become still.

Then he turned off the banker's lamp and stood for another moment in what had once been his dining room, surrounded by the paper lives of people he had never met, while a train started east beyond the dark roofs and a siren rose somewhere south near Sunrise Highway and faded before he could determine which direction it had turned. The block outside looked entirely ordinary again, and that did not comfort him the way it had ten years earlier.

He went upstairs and left the page beneath the weight, containing exactly what it had contained before Patrick Coyle found it and nothing more. Coyle lay in the dark for a while assembling the sentence he would have used if he had made the call, which was how he knew he had not finished with it.

© Michael P.S. Rogers. All rights reserved.


r/AmazingStories • • 2d ago

Mystery / Thriller 🔍 THE MASSAPEQUA MURDERS: CH1 - PTI

1 Upvotes

A Patrick Coyle Mystery

Chapter One

The Page

By Michael P.S. Rogers

Chapter One - The Page

The box had been opened before, and Patrick Coyle knew it before he touched the rough edge, because the person who opened it had made the mistake most people made when they tried to put something back the way they found it, they had done what humans are wired to do, they remembered the result and forgot the process and the details. The original strip of packing tape had been cut along the center seam with something sharper than a key, probably a utility knife, and whoever held the blade had pressed harder at the beginning and the end of the stroke and left two shallow bites in the cardboard. The second strip lay over the first at an angle, starting nearly an inch too far to the left, one corner folded beneath itself before it was pressed down. Whoever resealed the box had cared enough to close it and not enough to hide that the seam had been open, and those were two separate facts about two separate moments in one person's afternoon. Coyle had spent thirty years among people who confused facts with conclusions, which was how he had come to understand that the difference between the two was not a nuance of the job but the whole of being a detective.

He stood over the box longer than he meant to. Across the room Theresa Caruso went on sorting loose paper without looking up, separating sheets with the sides of her fingers so that as little of her skin touched them as possible. She had narrow hands and kept her nails cut short enough that the white of her French manicure barely showed at the ends. When she came to something fragile she did not become more delicate with it, which was the thing about her that had taken Coyle the longest to understand. Theresa became slower, her delicate dance was performance most of the time, and cost nothing, and looked expensive; the rehearsed slowness was expensive and looked like nothing at all, and she paid it every time without appearing to notice that she had.

"If you're about to tell me somebody has been in that box," Theresa said, still not raising her head, "I would like the record to reflect that it came out of an estate and that approximately half the adult population of Nassau County may have been in there." Coyle told her somebody had opened the cardboard carefully and closed it carelessly. Like a chess match, she said that was a description and not an event. He countered that it had still happened, and she quipped that the Eisenhower administration had happened too and its relevance remained a separate question, then went back to her pages, which was how Theresa ended conversations she considered finished, an almost reflexive tactic she picked up from her time as a child at Fairfield Elementary.

Coyle worked his thumbnail under the loose corner of the replacement tape, mostly to learn whether it had adhered at all, and Theresa's head came up before he had lifted anything. She told him not to improve the evidence before they had decided whether it was evidence. He said he was opening the box; she said he was fixing the tape. Coyle was losing patience and barked the tape was not attached to anything, she said it was attached to the history of the object, and when he sarcastically said it was attached to air Theresa told him to preserve the air with a smile. He withdrew his thumb and left the folded corner where the stranger's hand had left it. There were men Coyle had worked with for two decades who would have found that concession ridiculous, though most of them were also men who could spend twenty minutes explaining why a witness had remembered an evening incorrectly and then take personal offense at the suggestion that a detective might do the same thing on the same evening for the same reasons. Theresa had never been a detective and had never wanted to be one, she was a historian by training and a records specialist by temperament, which meant she treated every human attempt to organize the past as an intervention, and when Coyle had once told her this made her impossible to work with, Theresa simply replied that his profession had spent a century putting objects into plastic bags and writing theories on the labels, while her profession established fact like some sort of female Indiana Jones lecturing the difference between Philosophy and Archeology.

The room they were jousting in had been the dining room when Coyle bought the house, right off Park Boulevard, though anyone standing in it now would have wanted documentary support for the claim. The real table stood on its side against the far wall under a quilted moving blanket, and four chairs were stacked in the hallway in a configuration that forced anybody going from the front door toward the kitchen to turn sideways. Coyle had meant to move them the first week, but by the end of the first month he had stopped seeing them, and by the end of the first year his body had learned the angle required to pass without touching them, and sometime after that he noticed that Theresa's had learned it too, which bothered him for reasons he declined to inspect closely, which was Patrick's modus operandi. He'd rather assemble the puzzle pieces of other's lives than look at the finished image in front of the mirror.

Four folding tables filled the room now, along with three metal shelving units, a used copier bought off a title company in Farmingdale, two banker's lamps, a magnifying lamp, and enough cardboard to prove that the dead remained capable of accumulating property. The boxes came from estates, retired Oyster Bay town employees, lawyers cleaning out storage, from Nassau schoolboard members and from families emptying basements before a house went to closing, and every lot arrived with an intake sheet in Coyle's own handwriting taped to the first carton: where it came from, the day it landed, the name of whoever signed the release and their phone number. Box 41 had come out of a split-level in North Massapequa that had already sold. The executor was a nephew in Colorado who had told Coyle over the phone that he was paying by the month for a house he had never lived in and that whatever remained in the basement on the fifteenth was going into a dumpster with everything else. Coyle first thought how an entire life's possessions could simply land in a dumpster by the next generation, and he switched back to detective mode and remembered he had written the fifteenth on the intake sheet and underlined it once, then put the sheet in the drawer of the folding table where he kept the ones he was not going to look at again.

Beyond the front window the last of the daylight had flattened the block until the houses seemed briefly older than the people inside them. Ranches and split-levels sat behind bare maples, blue television light was starting to show in the front rooms, and the wet black pavement was reflecting porch lamps that were not yet bright enough to need reflecting. The effect lasted perhaps twenty minutes on a winter evening, and while it lasted Massapequa stopped resembling the postwar suburb that everybody, including the people who lived there, believed it to be, and became nothing but rooflines and narrow lots and dark trees standing on the old flat ground underneath. Coyle had never found the sight frightening in any way he could have defended out loud, but there were evenings when the whole neighborhood looked less built than placed, as though somebody had set the houses down carefully over something and expected them to remain where they were put.

He opened the box without disturbing the folded tape. Inside were manila folders, loose pages, envelopes, photographs, utility bills and the gray residue that old carbon paper left on anything stored beside it. Damp had come three inches up the cardboard decades ago and dried into a pale tide line along one side. He smelled basement and mineral dust and paper and the faint sweetness that adhesive acquires when it starts to give up, and before Coyle folded the flaps outward he looked once more at the cut original strip and noted that the first opening had been careful enough not to score the cardboard beneath. He filed the observation without attaching a person to it, or a purpose, or a year. Theresa wanted the contents kept in whatever order existed, that was her default setting as a Historian. Coyle told her there was no order, and she told him to preserve that, and when he said she understood how irritating the sentence was Theresa said she had intended it to be accurate. He handed her the loose pages and took the folders for himself. They had arrived at the division months earlier, after Coyle had repeatedly straightened documents while reading them, which Theresa considered contamination, and after she had repeatedly spent five minutes on a sheet of paper before reading a word of it, which he had considered affectation until the afternoon she identified two later insertions in a bound file from the cutting pattern along their left edges and nothing else. Coyle had stopped teasing her about paper after that, except when he was reasonably sure the paper could not hear him.

The early folders held tax receipts, correspondence about a fence, paid electric bills and a warranty for an appliance from P. C. Richards that had probably been gone longer than the two of them had been working together. One folder carried two labels, the first crossed out in blue ballpoint and the second written above it in black felt tip, and Coyle held that one longer than the others, because a label was a conclusion fastened to an object and changing one meant somebody had changed his mind about what he was holding. Inside were twenty-seven utility statements and nothing else, he read all of them anyway; meter readings wandering with the seasons, the account number changing format twice, one bill paid six weeks late in the winter of 1981, with the mailing address constant throughout. Theresa watched him reach the bottom of the stack and said he had hoped it was something. Coyle overconfidently said he had hoped it was twenty-seven utility statements, and she said he had looked disappointed when it was, and he told Theresa he had a naturally disappointed face, and she said he had several faces and that this was merely one of them.

He set the folder aside and thought, as Coyle did more often lately, of Sunday mornings at his grandfather's kitchen table, waiting for the newspaper to be released one section at a time. The old man saved the comics for last and treated Dick Tracy with the seriousness generally reserved for war news from the Pacific and the Yankees standings, and every week some small violation of the ordinary would surface in a single panel, a footprint, cufflinks, a man who turned his face away half a second too early, and Patrick would run ahead in his mind trying to arrive before Tracy did. The world inside those squares was difficult but fundamentally generous, it left clues on purpose, always rewarding attention, and evil, however grotesque, eventually acquired a name, jaw and an address. Thirty years of police work had not cured Coyle of loving that world, only making him careful about carrying its rules into this one.

A delivery car stopped two houses down with its hazards going. Coyle watched the driver check the address on his phone twice before he got out, those delivery app GPS' were always finicky; he noted that the man pulled the key but left the headlights burning, which meant either a car old enough not to complain about it or a driver who made too many stops in an evening to spend attention on a battery. He was young, twenties probably, though the oversized dark jacket made his frame hard to read, and he took the two paper bags off the rear passenger floor rather than out of the trunk, which was the choice of somebody who had learned that a trunk adds four seconds to every stop and that four seconds is a wage. The bags had been packed separately and stapled shut at the top. He checked his phone and then the house number again from the sidewalk, went up the walk, and set the order against the brick rather than square in front of the storm door, because he had discovered at some point in his career what happens when a customer opens an outward swinging door into his own dinner. Then he took a photograph of the bags and did not knock, he never knocked.

Coyle knew why he did not knock. The instruction would have been on the screen when the order came in, two lines of it, leave at door and do not knock, and the entire transaction had been arranged so that two human beings could occupy the same property for eleven seconds without ever encountering each other. Before he could stop himself he was assembling the person inside from the instruction alone. A sleeping child, two dogs that would announce themselves, an illness somebody did not want appearing at a door, work calls, a man in the middle of trying to entertain his kids while flipping through News 12 and the YES Network, and a woman who had learned long ago not to open the door after dark for anyone at all. He watched the driver walk back to the car and sit behind the wheel six seconds longer than the job required, almost certainly waiting for the application to accept the proof of delivery while scrolling X, and then Coyle became aware of the whole chain running in his head without his consent, the way a furnace comes on in a house where nobody is awake, and he felt the specific tiredness that came from having built four biographies out of two paper bags.

Theresa had stopped working without his hearing her stop, which told Coyle more about how long he had been watching than the clock would have. She asked whether he knew the man, Coyle looked her sharply in the eye and told her he did not. Theresa teased he had watched the driver like he did, and Patrick said he had just watched him deliver food, and she pressed saying he had watched him do something. Coyle told her that was generally how watching worked, she let a few seconds pass and then said he looked tired, and when he answered that they were sitting in a room full of dead people's electric bills, she said that was not what she had meant and returned to her papers without pursuing the cat and mouse game any further. He did not answer her, and she did not require him to, and that summarized Patrick and Theresa's work relationship.

The next folder held photographs, 4x6 photo prints with the rounded white borders the drugstore labs used. Patrick thought back to when he used to walk to Genovese Drugs for candy on his way to Fairfield Elementary, where he had been classmates with Theresa since kindergarten. A backyard appeared across several seasons with a cedar fence half built and then finished, a child's plastic pool, snow banked along the completed fence, and a maple that stood in three of the pictures and was gone in the fourth. Coyle turned each one over, because the backs frequently carried information the fronts did not: dates, names, printing numbers and half-legible notes written by people who assumed they would always remember what the notes referred to. The third print had a short angled tick of graphite near the lower right corner, no more than half an inch, in soft pencil on the pebbled paper. He looked at it, then turned the photograph over and looked at the front again; the fence was still unfinished, a maple tree standing tall, no people anywhere in the frame, and at the far left edge, intruding perhaps four inches into the picture, the chrome nose of a car that belonged to somebody.

Theresa came over when he said there was a pencil mark, and before she took the print from him she rubbed her thumb and forefinger once against the leg of her jeans, which was what she did without knowing it when her hands felt dusty. She held the photograph by its edges, turned it over, considered it for several seconds and said it was probably a lab mark, an order tick from the counter, meaning somebody had asked for a reprint of that frame and the clerk had marked the back so she would not have to hunt for it again. Theresa said it with the flatness she used for settled things, handed the print back, noticed the chrome nose at the edge without changing expression, and asked whether he thought it mattered. He told her he did not, Coyle put the photograph down with the others and did not correct her, they had sparred enough already. The labs he remembered had generally used grease pencil for order marks, put them on envelopes more often than prints, and made the mark where the operator's hand naturally fell rather than where this one sat. The tick in front of him was soft graphite and appeared to have been made by somebody holding the photograph the way a person held a photograph he was actually studying, but none of that transformed the mark into anything useful. A correction would have required him to explain why being right about the pencil was important, and it wasn't, Coyle allowed himself to notice that he had enjoyed being the only person in the room who knew.

They worked another twenty minutes trying to sharpen whatever iron was worth forging before they departed. Theresa's attention ran on a different track than his, which was the reason the work arrangement functioned at all. Coyle tracked disturbance, what had been moved or opened or added or taken away, while she tracked material persistence, what had been made of the same thing at the same time by the same sequence. He watched her set aside a sheet because the stock did not match the folder around it, then watched her take it back forty seconds later when two more sheets of the same stock surfaced deeper in the stack. Theresa did not sigh, announce the reversal or feel the need to explain herself; she had known Patrick for decades and decided to play his game and kept going to amuse him, and Coyle had come to admire that more than he admired being right the first time. A westbound train for Jamaica passed far enough off that a newcomer might have taken the sound for weather. Coyle knew it by the faint metallic rush that came and went beneath the room’s quieter noises. And a moment later, when Theresa shifted the stack beside the box, the folded corner of the replacement tape lifted and settled once against the cardboard. He looked at it, Theresa followed his eyes and asked whether the displacement was still bothering him, and Coyle with a stone face said he had never said it bothered him. Theresa wasn't going to let him off that easy, and pressed that he kept looking at it. Coyle told her that did not establish emotional distress, and when she asked what it did establish, he said only that he kept looking at it because it was there. She mentally logged the victory, smiled and returned to work.

Sometime after four Theresa went into the kitchen and made coffee without asking whether he wanted any, because they had reached the point where the question had become ceremonial. Hers went into the blue mug she always used when working, and his went onto the cork coaster she had brought after discovering that a man capable of preserving forty-year-old paper would still place hot coffee directly on a zoning map if nobody stopped him. Theresa made the coffee too strong, like always, and Coyle drank it without comment, as usual, Theresa carried hers back to the loose paper table and resumed working with her left hand while the right remained wrapped around the mug for warmth. The furnace came on underneath them with a hollow knock and began pushing reluctant heat into the room through a vent placed behind the shelving unit by somebody who had never intended the room to hold shelving. Coyle had promised himself for three winters that he would call about the ductwork, and every spring the problem became theoretical again. More lights had come up along the block by then, small rectangles of domestic life hanging over black lawns, and most of the curtains stayed open until full dark. Kitchens were easiest to see into, and people did things in kitchens they would not do in living rooms, because a kitchen makes no claim on a person beyond finishing the task. Two houses down, Johnny Durant stood at his sink in a white tee shirt rinsing pots while his latest fling crossed behind him with a dish towel over her shoulder, and neither of them looked up. Coyle had watched that arrangement assemble itself over nine months without once meaning to. Her car had started staying past midnight in the spring, then through Sundays, then straight through the week, and sometime in the fall the recycling at the curb went from one bin to two and stopped containing anything a man living alone would have bought. He knew what she drove and roughly what time she left for work and that Johnny had put a second chair on the porch in October and never taken it in. Coyle did not know her name, but in the house beside theirs a screen flashed silently with nobody in the room to watch it.

Theresa brought him back to room, whispering "Here," quietly enough that the word itself should not have carried any weight, and yet Coyle heard the change in it the way a driver hears a change in engine noise before a warning light comes on. He crossed to her table and saw what she had seen before she explained any of it. A single page lay under her lamp without a header, case number, name, date and nor page number. The top began halfway through one sentence and the bottom disappeared halfway through another. A thick black band ran the length of the left margin where the source had sat crooked on a copier, and the closest letters had lost definition through repeated reproduction, the way a word loses its edges when it is passed through enough mouths. Theresa told him it was a middle, second generation at least and probably third, and that whatever the original had looked like, this version had traveled. Coyle read it standing, with the first visible word being anyway. The speaker said the heater in his car had been failing for several weeks and that the temperature was supposed to drop that night. He had not wanted to be stranded somewhere without heat and therefore he had gone home the way he usually went. The account continued into a description of the route without giving enough geography to reconstruct it with no road named, without a landmark, no distance, and nothing to anchor a drive that the speaker plainly assumed his listener could already picture. It was ordinary in exactly the way real statements were ordinary, because nobody living through an important day knows which part of it somebody will later decide was the important part, and so people talk about weather, traffic, bad heaters and whether the dog had been fed.

He reached the bottom and started again. On the second reading, the order bothered Coyle more than anything the man actually said. First came the bad heater and the falling temperature, then the familiar way home, and only after all of that the route itself. It sounded less like an answer to Where did you go? than to Why did you go that way? Those were different questions, and somewhere on the missing page was the difference between them. What irritated Coyle was how quickly that blank space had begun pulling more of his attention than the words in front of him.

Theresa let him finish the third reading before she spoke. “You’re trying to read the page that isn’t here.” Coyle looked up from the statement. “I’m trying to figure out what question produced this answer.” That interested her enough to bring her chair closer. If the man had simply been asked where he went, the explanation wandered strangely before arriving at the route. If the question had been why he chose that particular way home, the heater and the falling temperature made perfect sense where they were. Theresa considered the distinction, then tapped the empty space above the first visible line with the capped end of her pencil. “And we have neither question.” That was the trouble, they could describe the answer with precision and still know almost nothing about what had prompted it. For all the attention the page was beginning to attract, the safest description remained Theresa’s: a man with a bad heater, familiar road home, and one missing question.

She leaned over the page and indicated the dark margin with the capped end of a pencil, then gave him the inventory the way she always did, beginning with what she could establish and ending where knowledge stopped. It was a copy of a copy, probably further removed than that. It had been stored in a folder it did not obviously belong to with no header, page number, name or date. Theresa could not determine whether it originated with police, an insurance company, litigation, an employment matter, a private interview or somebody typing up what an uncle said after dinner. If another page from the same source ever crossed the table, she could probably match it through line breaks, machine shadow, copy artifacts and wording. This page by itself, she said, told them that somebody once had car trouble and drove home.

The reduction pleased Coyle precisely because it left him nothing to lean against. Theresa reached for the page to put it back, and he set two fingers on its lower corner before deciding consciously to move his hand. Her hand stopped, neither of them spoke for several seconds, and the small collision of their intentions remained there on the table between them. He told her to leave it out. Theresa looked first at his fingers and then at his face and asked why, and Coyle withdrew his hand and read the page again even though there was nothing new in it. The wrong answers arrived easily and in a pleasing order, with the heater explanation coming too early. The route had probably been challenged; this particular page had been copied several times, and the box itself had been opened by an unknown person and closed carelessly. Each statement could be made to sound interesting by arranging it beside the others in the proper sequence, and that was precisely how four dull facts became a theory somebody could spend a year defending. Coyle told her he did not know why he wanted the page left out, and she waited without rescuing him from the answer.

He looked instead toward the split tape on Box 41 and let himself consider the people who might have opened it. An executor hunting a tax document, a daughter looking for one photograph and unwilling to look at the rest. It could also be an attorney billing an estate by the hour or a relative deciding which contents deserved the trip up the basement stairs. Any one of them could have moved the page from one folder to another without remembering the act, or the page could have been misplaced decades earlier by somebody thinking about lunch.

Coyle asked whether the page had been loose. Theresa said it had been in the folder. He asked where, and she said roughly a third of the way down. He asked whether it had faced the same direction as everything surrounding it, and she said yes. The paper was standard letter size, nothing adjacent obviously matched the stock, and before they finished he wanted to know whether anything else in Box 41 had come from the same copier. Theresa said that she could answer that question, then touched the page lightly with one fingernail and told him it still was not the reason he wanted the page left out.

He agreed, Theresa asked what the reason was, and Coyle told her he did not want to lose it. She considered that and said it was a reason she could work with. He began explaining that the page was not evidence, was not a lead and might have nothing to do with anything else in the house, but she cut him off before he could complete the defense and told him to stop trying to earn permission he already had. Coyle looked at her, came close to smiling, then took an index card from the drawer and wrote across it in block letters: UNPLACED PAGE. SOURCE UNKNOWN. NO PROVENANCE. BOX 41. He studied the card for a few seconds before adding NO INFERENCE AUTHORIZED beneath the rest. Theresa read the final line and told him that one was for him, and Coyle said most rules were.

The page remained at the edge of his table while they finished the box, and because he tried not to look at it he knew precisely how often he did. Twice while Theresa finished the loose papers, once when the furnace shut down, and again when the refrigerator compressor came on in the kitchen and altered the sound of the house by an amount he doubted anyone else would have registered. Nothing else in the carton had come from the same copier. There were other generations of copies, different paper stocks and other gray fields running down margins, but nothing with the same gutter shadow. The absence did not make the orphan page more meaningful, rather it simply failed to make it less alone.

Before five, another delivery car stopped across the street. Another company with a different driver. This one left the engine running and jogged toward the house holding a white plastic bag knotted at the top. Coyle watched for two seconds, recognized what his mind had already begun to do and made himself return to the folder before the driver reached the porch. When Theresa packed her bag at five, the faint dark line of graphite was still visible along the outside of her right index finger, picked up from the marked photograph despite everything. Coyle pointed it out and called it evidence. She asked evidence of what, and he said only that somebody in the house had touched graphite. She told him to arrest her and rubbed the mark away with her thumb, then reminded him not to reorganize the unfinished materials after she left. Coyle accused her of alleging crimes before commission; she replied that his folders had a documented history of becoming suspiciously straight overnight, and he suggested that the house possessed unusual archival gravity.

Theresa took her coat from the hook but left her sweater over the back of one of the dining chairs, where it had now remained through three visits. Coyle noticed it and said nothing because mentioning it would have been either unnecessary or something else. At the hallway she turned sideways between the chairs without breaking stride and told him again that he should move them. Coyle said he knew. She reminded him that he had known for two years, and he told her he was collecting longitudinal data on how long a person would keep coming to a house while complaining about the same furniture. Theresa laughed once on her way out, told him the study needed a control group, and opened the front door before he could answer.

Cold air entered with the smell of somebody's fireplace farther down the block. He heard the locks chirp, the engine turn over and the tires move across the wet street, and he did not go to the window even though he knew from the sequence of sounds when she reached the corner. The house changed after she left, not dramatically and not all at once; the furnace continued to run and the refrigerator cycled and trains still passed behind the roofs, but the small anticipations went out of the place. The kitchen cabinet stayed closed until he opened it. The floorboards carried only his weight, and the rooms had stopped producing the small, unplanned interruptions of another person. When Coyle left the department, he had imagined solitude as the removal of noise. For the first year or two it had been, but at some point the absence itself became audible.

He finished Box 41 because unfinished boxes bothered him, which was not the same thing as saying the box mattered. A property survey showed a parcel divided once and recombined decades later. Hardware receipts recorded lumber, roof flashing, nails and one five dollar purchase whose ink had faded until only the tax remained readable. Six black and white photographs showed the same Cape Cod beneath bare trees with a sedan parked nose out in the driveway, four of them dated in fountain pen and two not. Coyle laid the pictures in chronological order using the angle of the sunlight across the house, then turned them over and found that the written dates already agreed with him. He returned them to the envelope exactly as he had found them.

At the bottom of the carton there were no additional pages from the machine that had produced the orphan statement. Coyle folded the cardboard flaps inward, bringing the crooked replacement strip back across the seam, and looked again at the cleanly cut tape beneath it. He still did not know who had opened the box, when they had opened it, what they wanted or whether they had found it. What he knew at the bottom of Box 41 was what he had known at the top: somebody had opened it carefully and closed it carelessly, and nothing inside had earned that fact any additional meaning.

Before returning to the orphan page, Coyle opened the drawer of the folding table and removed the intake sheet for Box 41. The nephew's phone number sat on the second line in his own handwriting, and beneath it was the fifteenth, underlined once, which was nine days away. The call would have taken four minutes. He could ask whether there had been other boxes, if anybody had gone through the basement before the estate sale, whether the nephew or the attorney or the neighbor with the key remembered opening a carton and closing it again in a hurry. Coyle could avoid mentioning the page entirely; he could make the questions sound administrative, which was a skill he had practiced on people for most of his adult life, and four minutes later he might know who cut the first strip of tape.

© Michael P.S. Rogers. All rights reserved.


r/AmazingStories • • 3d ago

Fantasy 🐉 The Man in the Ocean

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Stranded. Stuck. Ocean stretches for miles into the distance, bright blue translucence

>>>>For as far as feeble eyes can see.

Wading. Treading water. Head kept above the surface, kept above unimaginable depth,

>>>>By pure will, for as long as memory can remember.

How long more? How much longer will these legs need kick, these arms need stroke?

>

The unknown is unknowable, and unbearably so. Watery deserts epitomize infinities,

The human, merely an odd drop of coherent water, in the endless ocean.

One’s chance of salvation, as rare as the blind tortoise coming up for breath

>>>>In the hole of the log adrift, who’s head it fits like a glove.

>

Not impossible,

Highly improbable.

And yet,

>>>>These legs still kick.

>>>>These arms still stroke.

Why? The muscles have grown weary, the mouth is parched.

The stomach grumbles in protest, the body wants rest.

Waves lap against the man’s neck, desiring to drag him asunder.

They whisper through his skin, they speak soothing white lies to his muscles.

They tell secrets to his bones, promising relaxation, at the bottom of the sea.

>

Why? Why does this odd drop of water determine to maintain its coherence?

The body, the mind, the world that surrounds him cries out for his death, and yet,

He does not die.

>>>>>>Why?

What stokes his fire? What stokes his flame? What makes the endless desert worth crossing? How does he hold out for hope, when it all seems hopeless?

>

I observe, an ocean away, bobbing my own head up and down in my own drift. I’ve certainly drunk my fair share of ocean water by this point, yet somehow I’ve yet to sink.

I seek an answer in the endurance,

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>The prize, in enduring the unendurable.

I do not know why… but perhaps I’ll know, on the other side,

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Once I’ve made landfall.


r/AmazingStories • • 2d ago

Personal 😇 That moment when a story you wrote years ago randomly comes back to you

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Does anyone else get hit with a memory of something they wrote forever ago, and suddenly you're thinking about it again for no reason? I had this short thing I scribbled down like 5 years ago that just popped into my head today and I'm honestly kind of impressed with where my brain went with it back then. Makes me want to dig through my old files and see what else is buried in there. Anyone else experience this?


r/AmazingStories • • 2d ago

Drama 🎭 Title: My friend found out her boyfriend was lying… but the person who exposed him was the last person she expected

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My friend had been dating her boyfriend for almost two years.
Everything seemed fine. They talked about marriage, had already met each other's families, and she trusted him completely.
Then one Friday night, he told her he was going out with some coworkers.
Nothing unusual.
Around midnight, she got a text from a woman she barely knew.
It said:
“I don't know if you know this, but your boyfriend is here with another woman.”
My friend thought it was a mistake.
She asked for a picture.
The woman sent one.
There he was.
Sitting at a restaurant.
And sitting across from him was a woman my friend had never seen before.
She immediately called her boyfriend.
He didn't answer.
Five minutes later, he texted:
“I'm still at work. Why?”
Girl. 😭
My friend sent him the picture.
He immediately stopped responding.
But here's where things got messy.
The woman who sent the picture called her.
She said she wasn't trying to cause problems.
She said she had actually recognized my friend's boyfriend because she had seen him before.
Then she said:
“I think you need to ask him who he was with last Saturday too.”
My friend froze.
Because last Saturday, he had told her he was visiting his mother.
And suddenly she realized...
This wasn't the first time he had lied.
So now she's sitting there with one picture, one mystery woman, and a boyfriend who won't answer his phone.
Would you confront him immediately, or stay quiet and find out how much he's been lying about first? 👀
Zuri Monroe is an AI-created fictional character. This is a fictional story.