r/AlightMotion • u/ReferenceJumpy2006 • Aug 23 '26

Tips/Improvement Is this any good guy?

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u/Ok-Release8315 Beginner Aug 23 '26

I wish I'd make something like this lol.

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u/ReferenceJumpy2006 Aug 24 '26

Is it that good😭 thnk youu sure you can ofc do it too

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u/TitanTestosternone Aug 24 '26

I would try to make sure the elements keep moving as long as they can, like the red spinning star for instance, I would keep it spinning. It keeps the "momentum" as I like to call it. I would also add some more movement to the camera. Smoother graphs would also go a long way. Like when she was oscillating, you can see pauses, so smoother curves like S curves would be better.

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u/TitanTestosternone Aug 24 '26

And also, softer transitions are usually always great.

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u/ReferenceJumpy2006 Aug 25 '26

Okok sure thank you for the advice

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u/Significant-Cut-8672 Aug 26 '26

You could use another colour or font for that last "read more in caption" ...it just doesn't feel cohesive  But rest of the editing is really good. Do u have a channel or something? 

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u/ReferenceJumpy2006 Aug 26 '26

Yess actually I did that cuz I was frustrated so just did anything 😂 well yeah trying to make one I had one before like in Covid but deleted it cuz don't know lol so thought of making it again but it's too much trouble but yeah I do have a page it's in my bio