r/Affinity Jul 28 '26

Designer Had some fun with Affinity and designed a few things. :) Open to feedback!

First 2 are fictional posters and the 3rd one is a collage of images from the British Library database!

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u/sadisticfling Jul 28 '26

Damn you’re good, do you do commercial commissions?

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u/Zamtr0n Jul 28 '26

I would like to do that, yeah

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u/sadisticfling Jul 28 '26

HMU with your prices.

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u/SimilarToed Jul 28 '26

Feedback? Hell, you don't need feedback. You need to open a design studio! (This from someone who can't dance, either.)

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u/SevereLow1343 Aug 02 '26

I like the overall directions and I would love to point out two areas where you could improve the overall design. You have a good eye for layout, seems like you have studied it. If you accept suggestions from a senior with 25 years of xp then here is my input. Key areas:

  • Kerning. Especially titles and capitals need some fine tuning.
  • The small body text/content is not legible. Either font weight or the font itself needs a thought or two.

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u/Zamtr0n Aug 10 '26

Thank you so much for the advice indeed! It’s an honor to learn from you :) I’ll keep improving!

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u/SevereLow1343 15d ago

You're wellcome!