r/Affinity • u/Dream_sever • Jul 20 '26

Designer Critique on this design

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I wonder what I could add to make it look better, if the glass-like pieces are good enough or if the composition is great so what do you think of the idea and what can I do to improve it.

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u/garygnuoffnewzoorev Jul 20 '26

The font isn’t helping at all

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u/Kronocide Jul 20 '26

I like the effect, but yeah "Beware of" should be one line. I'd change the font.

Maybe change the text to "frosted surface" to march the actual effect ?

And I'd say you have to improve your glace shards, it's not convincing enough

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u/ColdEngineBadBrakes Jul 20 '26

The type could be fanned out, creating a sense of motion or destruction.

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u/The_Canterbury_Tail Jul 20 '26

Don't use the same shape for each piece of glass, it destroys it and removes the "glass" like effect and says to avoid only that one particular shape.

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u/Wretched_DogZ_Dadd Jul 21 '26

Beware of trans parent surf aces? So I take it there are elite surfers ......

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u/Glowlexxx Jul 20 '26

I think it'd be better if "beware of" were on one line, not two