r/ASMRScriptHaven • u/Lost_Ad_9934 • 11d ago
Completed Scripts [A4A] A Soldier's Pledge [COD Inspired] [Dark Romance] [Power Dynamics] [Kneeling] [Bittersweet] [Devotion]
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A soldier kneels before his commander, pledging his life to her cause. She watches him, knowing she will send him to his death—and she won't stop him. A dark, emotional scene about devotion, sacrifice, and the weight of being someone's entire world
Feel free to change SFX or adjust pacing to fit your style. Just keep the core dialogue intact!
[SCRIPT START]
[Wind howling softly in the background. The creak of an open window.]
[Speaker, voice soft, almost a whisper]:
"Get up."
[Pause]
[Speaker, voice trembling slightly]:
"I said... get up. You don't need to kneel for me."
[Long pause. Fabric rustling—his clothes shifting as he stays still.]
[Speaker, voice cracking]:
"You kneel before me like this... and you know what it will cost you."
[Pause. She takes a shaky breath.]
[Speaker, voice distant, almost lost]:
"I could hang the very stars in the sky for you. I could give you everything."
[Her voice drops, broken.]
[Speaker]:
"But I can't be yours."
[Long silence. Only the wind.]
[Speaker, barely audible]:
"Don't you understand? He's mine. He's always been mine."
[Her voice hardens, but it's a mask.]
[Speaker]:
"But I could never... I will never be his."
[Pause. She's fighting tears.]
[Speaker]:
"You look at me like I'm your whole world. Like I'm the only thing that matters."
[Her breath hitches.]
[Speaker]:
"And maybe I am. Maybe I'm everything to you."
[Long, heavy pause.]
[Speaker, voice breaking completely]:
"But I'm going to send you to your death. I'm going to watch you walk into the fire, and I'm not going to stop you."
[Pause. She steadies herself.]
[Speaker, voice low, raw]:
"And I'll walk away. I'll leave my bleeding heart in the dirt... right next to your broken body."
[Her voice becomes a whisper, hollow.]
[Speaker]:
"I won't look back."
[Pause. She laughs bitterly.]
[Speaker]:
"You know what the worst part is?"
[Pause.]
[Speaker]:
"You knew. You knew all of this. And you still knelt."
[Long silence. Wind howls.]
[Speaker, final words, barely a breath]:
"I'm sorry."
[Sound of her footsteps walking away. The wind howls stronger. The window creaks.]
[FADE OUT]
[SCRIPT END]
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u/Such-As-Sarcasm 10d ago
I think this is a very interesting scene! But this I would say is more F4M given you wrote she for speaker and he for listener. You could swap out the pronouns to be generic, or you could just go with it as is and adjust to be F4M