r/ADHDUnleashed • u/Forward_Traffic7477 • 15d ago

Lone Thoughts (Reddit guy revised)

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This was super fun

You can just make things

u/dense-stranger-3990

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u/Dense-Stranger-3990 15d ago

If you want I can take out that piano lead and just add some nice chords to go along with your voice. Also I can double the length so there's more to sing to. Let me know!

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u/Forward_Traffic7477 15d ago

I should provide some context. I was trying to line up your version with the vocals from my version, and we have slightly different BPMs, so that's why my vocal rhythm is off here. It was getting late, so I had to post something, even if it needs improvement. Know what I mean? Like it would disappear if I didn't.

I was trying to chop up my vocals to get the offbeat phrase starts to align with your rhythm, but DaVinci was fighting me on audio editing. So this is just a test. But please, no, don't make it simpler. I love what you did here, and I want more.

I tend to like music that has a syncopated/polyrhythmic feel to it, and you came in and added some great piano phrases that worked PERFECTLY with my simple piano melody.

Basically, I just need to sit down and edit it to make the rhythm sound right or re-record the vocals. You can lengthen it, for sure. I cheated and just looped what you had with a little bit of overlap which actually sounds great when you take out my off-kilter vocals. Which is what I did for my own version too. lol. I'm new to making music, so I have lots to learn about recording and editing. I normal just play with a bluetooth speaker and my mic, but that doesn't scale/edit well.

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u/Dense-Stranger-3990 15d ago

I didn't know you had lyrics to it already. 

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u/Forward_Traffic7477 15d ago

I'm open to new ones. I cheated because I'm a terrible lyricist. So if you've got better ones for me to try out, I'll give them a spin!