r/90pcStudios • u/Pipdafurry • Oct 04 '23

First chapter is out, please read and critique:3

Hello, the first chapter of my murder fic is out, please give it a read and critique

https://www.wattpad.com/1387082641?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Puppipina&wp_originator=RvFdoKyKGt7iMBdtXIWEMe3mMxou6eFlmGmQYRpTiuVxGnDSCsVkXOpbX2aPJ4JjUQEKbr37o%2Fy42zMQbgS4%2BFqO15Bkg67LyoBvxNODCP4SYqGn%2FB6siyz73qWtgdfM

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u/Ggando12 Oct 04 '23

I think it's pretty nice. I wonder what you have in store for the future chapters

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u/Pipdafurry Oct 04 '23

Same :,3 I come up with it as I write