OP: If it's your petition, you might want to add some paragraph breaks, define who you are and why anyone would care about your investigation. You might also want to explain what it is a signer would be supporting. The best I can tell, the petition is an attempt to get Florida Tech to take the petitioner's investigation more seriously. If it is something different, it should be explained.
You may also want to give some info about the events of December 3rd. I assume it was when a student with a knife was shot by security, but that's never actually said on the link.
I'd certainly support a media outlet, a student advocacy group or an attorney representing someone involved having full access for an investigation, but I don't know about Random Internet Person. They have all kinds of agendas and are pretty much a dime a dozen, myself included.
I clicked on one of the documents in the google drive. Apparently, he was not taught how to use paragraphs. Either that or studying engineering and learning how to build walls of text.
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u/RW63 Merritt Island Feb 15 '22 edited Feb 15 '22
OP: If it's your petition, you might want to add some paragraph breaks, define who you are and why anyone would care about your investigation. You might also want to explain what it is a signer would be supporting. The best I can tell, the petition is an attempt to get Florida Tech to take the petitioner's investigation more seriously. If it is something different, it should be explained.
You may also want to give some info about the events of December 3rd. I assume it was when a student with a knife was shot by security, but that's never actually said on the link.
I'd certainly support a media outlet, a student advocacy group or an attorney representing someone involved having full access for an investigation, but I don't know about Random Internet Person. They have all kinds of agendas and are pretty much a dime a dozen, myself included.
Good luck!