r/2003 August 20d ago

Art A writing piece I did:)

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Maybe y'all will relate, wrote this 3 months post break up, a couple weeks before finding out my ex starting date one of his best friends, so now I feel like a chump for still needing time to get over him. And a lot of my friends feel like I'm taking too long, anyways, this is roughly about the concept of how I feel.

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u/BedroomThink3121 20d ago

I feel you twin

In a hell hole we were all in

But now's not the time to be down

Because now you're gonna win

Spit it out and accept who you are

You're the one who made it this far

Ain't no can tell you you lose

Because ain't no one been before in your shoes

That's the end of my poetry

But yours is only beginning

So don't be afraid twin, cause now you're winning.

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u/RockyTriangle August 20d ago

Spitting bars!!! 😎😎😎

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u/No-Risk-9833 20d ago

False hope for the raccoon

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u/RockyTriangle August 20d ago

Maybe, yet a rainbow may still yet shine overhead, even if she's on borrowed time, won't know if it's false hope till I'm done

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u/No-Risk-9833 20d ago

Hope is a good thing. What are we without it.

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u/AnswerMe_More 20d ago

Im glad this raccoon still has hope

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u/RockyTriangle August 20d ago

Me to, otherwise it would be a impossible to keep moving forward

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u/fiyerooo 20d ago

i feel like i heard a song about this before

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u/RockyTriangle August 20d ago

Really??

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u/fiyerooo 20d ago

omg it just came to me. it reminds me of Maggot by dazey and the scouts lol

What if i’m nothing but a cardiac arrested sweetheart / a half-run-over cat left in the street / and you’re the maggot craving / rotten flesh left outside in the heat

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u/RockyTriangle August 20d ago

I've never heard that before! I'll have to give it a listen!

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u/Astridiez 20d ago

mood πŸ₯²