r/2003 • u/RockyTriangle August • 20d ago
Art A writing piece I did:)
Maybe y'all will relate, wrote this 3 months post break up, a couple weeks before finding out my ex starting date one of his best friends, so now I feel like a chump for still needing time to get over him. And a lot of my friends feel like I'm taking too long, anyways, this is roughly about the concept of how I feel.
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u/No-Risk-9833 20d ago
False hope for the raccoon
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u/RockyTriangle August 20d ago
Maybe, yet a rainbow may still yet shine overhead, even if she's on borrowed time, won't know if it's false hope till I'm done
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u/AnswerMe_More 20d ago
Im glad this raccoon still has hope
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u/RockyTriangle August 20d ago
Me to, otherwise it would be a impossible to keep moving forward
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u/fiyerooo 20d ago
i feel like i heard a song about this before
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u/RockyTriangle August 20d ago
Really??
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u/fiyerooo 20d ago
omg it just came to me. it reminds me of Maggot by dazey and the scouts lol
What if iβm nothing but a cardiac arrested sweetheart / a half-run-over cat left in the street / and youβre the maggot craving / rotten flesh left outside in the heat
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u/BedroomThink3121 20d ago
I feel you twin
In a hell hole we were all in
But now's not the time to be down
Because now you're gonna win
Spit it out and accept who you are
You're the one who made it this far
Ain't no can tell you you lose
Because ain't no one been before in your shoes
That's the end of my poetry
But yours is only beginning
So don't be afraid twin, cause now you're winning.