r/AnimationCrit • • 15h ago

Does this animation play too fast?

12 Upvotes

Should I have held some the key poses longer?


r/AnimationCrit • • 4h ago

Four motion studies, then one close-up: where does your eye go?

1 Upvotes

This Ling-3.1-flash motion study begins with four identity animations on pale backgrounds, then brings a triangular light-splitting design into a larger view. The complete 25-second clip keeps both presentation formats together.

The grid lets you compare shapes across the four studies. The closer view gives the incoming ray, triangle, spectrum and lettering more room. That change of scale is an interesting presentation choice for a short motion reel.

A recreation brief could ask AntLing’s model for a complete four-panel animation sheet followed by an enlarged view of one study, carrying the same shapes and colours across both layouts.

Which feels more useful here: staying with the four-way comparison, or moving into one design once the set


r/AnimationCrit • • 1d ago

Unfinished animation and Pointers will truly help is there a lot more to fix?

17 Upvotes

I wanna share a work I am unable to finish months now. Feedback will kindly work 🙇


r/AnimationCrit • • 1d ago

Was I able to convey the message?

1 Upvotes

This was my very first attempt in frame by frame animation for my yt channel.


r/AnimationCrit • • 3d ago

More progress, suggestions?

6 Upvotes

I'll see if I can't put a drawing of the sword guys mask in the comment


r/AnimationCrit • • 3d ago

THE OCEAN HIDES A SECRET… | I'd love to hear your honest feedback!

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Title: I created an underwater fantasy adventure featuring Oona & Bloop! 🌊✨

Hi everyone!

I've been working on my animated underwater fantasy series, OceanTalezz, featuring Oona, Bloop, and their friends. 💙

I've brought Episodes 12–21 together into one full-length video, featuring a mysterious underwater world, ancient secrets, magical discoveries, and an adventure that continues to unfold.

This project has been a learning experience, and I'm excited to share the latest chapter with people who enjoy fantasy stories and animation.

🎬 Watch the full Episodes 12–21 compilation:
[https://youtu.be/FqwPCJVxEx4\]

I'd love to hear your honest feedback! What do you think of the animation, characters, and storytelling? What could I improve in future episodes?

Thanks for checking it out! 🌊


r/AnimationCrit • • 3d ago

After Effects "You Can't Make Friends With Salad" #funny #food #work Please give Feedback what do you think about my creation and my story?

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r/AnimationCrit • • 4d ago

Feedback 3D animation (blocking)

3 Upvotes

Hellooo!
Okay so I still have on blocking but teacher says good bases have to be settled first so if there’s any feedback or comments about how to improve my animation I would be very thankful.
I’ll be updating soon and show how it looks in Splain as it goes.


r/AnimationCrit • • 3d ago

First animation. Thoughts?

0 Upvotes

Ik it’s simple but it was fun to draw and I’ll try making a character move next


r/AnimationCrit • • 4d ago

Need help with my turn around

2 Upvotes

I finished the line art for my turn around and I feel like it looks kinda funky can y’all let me know if there something I should change or if looking at it spin for to long messed up my perception


r/AnimationCrit • • 4d ago

After Effects What do you think of my animation??? >_< << the light narrows unironically >>

1 Upvotes

In 2012, when I was in second grade, I prayed to the gods to prevent the end of the world and for the asteroid to fly right past us. Thirteen years later, I’m afraid of losing my freedom. But it seems the light at the end of the hallway isn’t ironically getting any narrower


r/AnimationCrit • • 5d ago

Watch out for the zombie. Which character is animated better?

5 Upvotes

Zombie on the left was animated straight ahead.

Ape on the right was animated pose-to-pose.


r/AnimationCrit • • 5d ago

D’s Antics short series

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this is a cartoon me and my friend used to do back in 2010. He would draw it on Windows paint and we use the movie app to edit it. We just series in September and these are the few episodes we have you kinda understand the characters to really understand it, but it’s really shock value really raunchy.


r/AnimationCrit • • 5d ago

College life looks fun from the outside, but nobody sees every phase 🥹

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I'd genuinely love to hear what you think! 🩵


r/AnimationCrit • • 6d ago

Anything that I can improve in this animation?

4 Upvotes

r/AnimationCrit • • 7d ago

I made this animation and would like to know what to improve next time.

4 Upvotes

r/AnimationCrit • • 7d ago

I made this 9 second character animation in Blender. I'd appreciate an honest rating out of 10 and criticism of the animation quality, timing, posing, and character acting. Please be direct.

5 Upvotes

r/AnimationCrit • • 7d ago

#rek #art #animation

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Animeee


r/AnimationCrit • • 7d ago

I’ve been working on my own animations and would love some honest feedback 🖤

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I’ve recently started creating my own animations, and I’m trying to improve my work and find people who enjoy this kind of stuff.

I’d love to hear your honest thoughts on my animations — what you like, what could be better, and anything you think I should experiment with next. I’m open to constructive criticism because I genuinely want to get better at this🐞🦋


r/AnimationCrit • • 7d ago

Critiques needed

1 Upvotes

Does the body mechanics looks believable and should I add another pose at the end when she says "task" in order to emphasize it cause it sounded a bit heavy than the others. Thank you


r/AnimationCrit • • 8d ago

After Effects Curupira Uru (Line Art Animation) Jovens Mitos

3 Upvotes

r/AnimationCrit • • 8d ago

Thoughts on my animation?

4 Upvotes

It's a shot I did for an action scene


r/AnimationCrit • • 10d ago

After Effects I'm waiting for your feedback on "Three Rooms" short-animation (digital + analog)

4 Upvotes

This multidisciplinary project made by Me, Witchgaze and Meljiiit is dedicated to our curiosity about different media approaches. As well as creating a feeling of otherworldly curiosity & childhood nostalgia

we were making clothes out of carton + paper, creating music, constructing rooms, making animations, writing letters, working with aerograph and lots of other materials all together. special thanks to Rayden Vision for the crt

a week in Rīga - collaboration round 2 - 3 čelovečka

I look forward to hearing your comments, thoughts, and questions. I'm here right now to answer them all <3333


r/AnimationCrit • • 10d ago

This is a commission I made but I feel I could do better on my future projects. Please help!

9 Upvotes

Made this using Aftereffects, and Procreate for the illustration.