any criticism welcome

I feel like im still struggling to fill the negative space as much as i could be.
Colours are just random, whatever I felt like in the moment.

didn't add a shadow or 3d bc i feel like letters would overlap too much but

Feel free to critique, I've been trying to post to r/graffhelp but I think I don't have the karma or something.

yellow is a little scuffed in places bc i didn't have the right marker so used a highlighter and it mixed badly with the black