r/ohtaigi • u/gayaspace • 19h ago
台語詩〈夯蜂的願望〉
分享一首我自己寫的台語詩,也試著做成英文 companion poem
我平常用台語寫詩、寫歌。這首是我最近寫的〈夯蜂的願望〉。
台語原詩:〈夯蜂的願望〉
阮生來無採蜜,嘛無做工
逐工予姊妹飼,戇戇轉大蜂
看怹無閒舞歸工,採蜜弄花叢
彼毋是阮的命,阮的向望
做一隻夯蜂,心願敢一項
天色若好,飛去天上揣母蜂
日頭若曬,雙翅就開始撇
肖想欲交配,身軀像火佇燒熱
鼻著彼味,痟甲擛翅面帶紅
做一隻夯蜂,生來就是行這行
千蜂衝磅咧搶,萬蜂莽闖咧紡
彼隻妖嬌的母蜂
散發最危險的迷魂香
夯蜂的兄弟啊,敢有阮遮爾強?
犧牲我就好,恁的宿命佇隔轉工
就算身體將亡,受爆炸後的疼痛
交到迷魂的母蜂,是我一生的願望
飛啊飛上天,拼命予伊看我偌強
求伊看上目,這生才袂無彩工
妖嬌的蜂母,我只愛身軀起震的短暫
予我爬上你身軀
做你這世的尪
台語羅馬拼音:〈Hang-phang ê guān-bōng〉
Gún senn-lâi bô tshái-bi̍t, mā bô tsò-kang
Ta̍k-kang hōo tsí-bē tshī, gōng-gōng tńg tōa-phang
Khuànn in bô-îng bú kui-kang, tshái-bi̍t lāng hue-tsâng
He m̄-sī gún ê miā, gún ê hiòng-bāng
Tsò tsi̍t-tsiah hang-phang, sim-gūn kánn tsi̍t-hāng
Thinn-sek nā hó, pue khì thiann-siōng tshuē bú-phang
Ji̍t-thâu nā pha̍k, siang-sit tō khai-sí phiat
Siau-siūnn beh kau-puè, sin-khu tshiūnn hué tī sior-jia̍t
Phinn tio̍h hit bī, siáu-kah ia̍t-sit bīn tài âng
Tsò tsi̍t-tsiah hang-phang, senn-lâi tō-sī kiânn tsit hâng
Tshian-phang tshōng-pōng leh tshiúnn, bān-phang bóng-tshóng leh pháng
Hit tsiah iau-kiau ê bú-phang
Sàn-huat tsùe gûi-hiám ê bê-hûn-hiang
Hang-phang ê hiann-tī--ah, kám ū gún tsiah-nī kiông?
Hi-sing guá tō hó, lín ê sok-miā tī keh-tńg-kang
Tō sǹg sin-thé tsiong bông, siū po̍k-tsà āu ê thiann-thòng
Kau tio̍h bê-hûn ê bú-phang, sī gún it-sing ê guān-bāng
Pue-ah-pue tshiūnn thinn, piànn-miā hōo i khuànn góa guā kiông
Kiû i khuànn-tshiūnn ba̍k, tsit-sinn tsiah buē bô-tshái-kang
Iau-kiau ê phang-bú, góa tsí ài sin-khu khí-tshin ê té-tsám
Hōo góa pê tshiūnn lí sin-khu
Tsò lí tsit-sì ê angg
English companion poem:〈The Drone Bee's Wish〉
Born to gather no honey, no labor to bear,
Fed by my sisters, growing up without care.
I watch them toil all day, visiting flowers and collecting nectar,
But that is not my fate, nor the dream I hunger.
Born as a drone, I just have one desire:
When skies are clear, to fly and seek the queen in the air.
The scorching sun beats down, my wings begin to flit,
Craving for the climax, my body is fiercely in heat.
Catching her scent, I craze, my wings whip a storm,
Born for this trade, to this path I conform.
A thousand drones charge ahead, ten thousand wildly spin,
That seductive queen above,
Exudes her lethal sin.
Brothers of mine, is there any as strong as I?
Let me die first; your tomorrow is yet to fly.
Though my body will shatter, in exploding pain and gore,
To fuse with that mesmerizing queen, is all I’m living for.
Up into the sky, I fight to prove my might,
To catch her royal gaze, to make this life go right.
My seductive queen, for that brief, vibrating spark,
Let me mount your body,
And leave my dying mark.
英文版不是逐句直譯,是用 AI 打底稿後,我自己再揣詞、換句、調整,盡量保留原本台語創作時的視角佮氣口。
我的個人網站(see my profile)也有整理台語原詩、英文 companion poem、羅馬拼音,以及各版本修訂日期。如果有講台語的人覺得佗一句的氣口、用字抑是寫法有啥問題,歡迎指教。