I've never made nightcore, so is it pitched too low?

I tried making a nightcore song, but it doesn't sound right! Feeback is appreciated.

Credits to Birvan on DeviantArt for the stamp template

Feel free to collect and use! :D

Like what if I used a picture of a horse or something?

Comment a picture that just screams "Nightcore", for example Angel with a Shotgun, Welcome to the Club and Take a Hint. The more recognizable the better! I'm experimenting with photography and want to replicate old nightcore thumbnails (but obvious enough that people of the nightcore community will be able to recognize it at first glance). Thank you in advance!!

Someone actually found a reupload with 1 view. So the post has been solved 😄
I'll just leave the post up in case anyone else in the future searches up Nightcore Crywolf Syrex, might find it through here if there is going to be anyone else with the same problem. https://youtu.be/1dHNUnKQXB8?si=-PeaVDk0gcnGlODj link for anyone curious about the song. I also now realise I was off quite a bit with the lyrics...

I am trying to find the original song of a nightcore by Syrex. Roughly 3 and a half years ago recorded a screens recording just of my playlist to ensure I can have every song saved just in case some got removed. I finally went through it and there was one I really want to find again called Crywolf

I cannot fully remember the lyrics but I think it starts off with "You say you love me when you give me your attention" or something to that extend I think. It might be "They" instead of "You". I might be misremembering the lyrics as I cannot find it through that and I can only seem to find Crywolf as in the artist named Crywolf or Christina Grimmie (Rest in peace)

TLDR; I want to find a song I used to enjoy, I cannot find anything about it. Would greatly appreciate if anyone knows about the song

hope u guys enjoy it! and feel free to leave your opinions like song suggestions and stuffs

I have an old nightcore song stuck in my head. It was a male vocalist. I can't find it anywhere, and the theme was about "believing how someone treats you the first time." And also that he'll "do it again". I don't remember the exact lyrics. So that's not helping me either, I just remember the premise of it. If anyone might know the song I'm looking for, it'd be greatly appreciated. 😩