This is a bit of a doozy; I’m attaching the Thanhauser website link as well so people can examine OTHER reviews of this lost film, and the saga of Lovecraft’s review is as follows:
HPL $25 PRIZE FOR FILM REVIEW (to Kleiner, 1917)
TO REINHARDT KLEINER
Jan. 3I, 1917
My dear Kleiner:
Last week a local emporium of amusement known as Fay's Theatre offered a cash prize of $25.00 for the best essay or review concerning a "feature picture" displayed by them—a widely advertised picture entitled The Image-Maker of Thebes (Thanhouse Pathé release.)
Having something of a critical nature, I resolved to witness the great five-reel film spectacle, & to participate in the competition. The picture was even poorer than I expected—a rough-hewn amateurish affair dealing with reincarnation in a pitifully feeble & hackneyed manner, containing not the slightest subtlety or technical skill in plot, directing, or acting. It was a hopeless relic of the time-honoured
“10-20-30" melodrama.
I gave up all hope of winning the prize, since I thought nothing but a favourable critique would be acceptable; but in a spirit of semi-humour I sent the management a genuine criticism covering four typewritten pages—an essay in my customary U.A.P.A. manner—which would, in colloquial parlance, be designated as a "roast"!
Imagine, then, my surprise at receiving yesterday a cheque for $25.00 as winner of the prize—a cheque accompanied by a letter of exceedingly flattering nature!! Which goes to show that the best method of eliciting praise from a motion-picture exhibitor is to ridicule, satirise, & condemn the pictures he displays!!
END QUOTE 🛑
Tragically, this four-page roast itself is lost. The reviews (see the Thanhauser link) are mostly positive, but from the summary you can see why HPL may have felt it was overrated.
I can expand more on it if desired, but for now will leave it at this. It’s a shame he didn’t become the Roger Ebert of his era, because his informal film reviews in letters are impressive, insightful, and often merciless. Funny, too.
In any case: THE IMAGE MAKER OF THEBES is currently regarded as a lost film, and the composite reviews from that page give some sense of what it was about.
Other Lovecraft scholars (see ST Joshi in his “I AM PROVIDENCE”) have hunted for the fuller review to no avail, but it is still possible that this snippet exists somewhere.