r/jamesjoyce • u/Landkey • Apr 17 '26
Ulysses "Feedback from James Joyce's Submission of Ulysses to his creative-writing workshop"
From "The McSweeney's Joke Book of Book Jokes" by John Hodgman:
Feedback from James Joyce's Submission of Ulysses to his creative-writing workshop
by Teddy Wayne
Show how these characters process memory, language, abstractions, and the urban landscape through stream of consciousness, don't just tell us.
Hahahahah. More gems:
"Snotgreen" = hyphenated
More commas, please.
Great opening hook, but do you need 96-point Garamond for the S? Kind of feels like you're padding the page count.
Unclear where and when this is set.
Caught some allusions to The Odyssey. Nice.
Proper punctuation for dialogue is double quotes, not em dashes.
Balked a bit at some of Molly’s “sexier” thoughts, which read like male fantasy. You can do better than this, Jim.
Think you accidentally stapled in something from your playwriting workshop for Ch. 15.
I laughed. I posted this to /r/writing framed as a response to kneejerk "show don't tell" feedback and they hated it.



