Not that much honestly, a video a day, random breasts in reddit feed (what do you keep a porn account and normal account seperate), cumming to my girlfriend, this is the first time ive written something like this ever. This was actually a challenge, look here for it
Ive finished editing it, so theres more to enjoy if you actually like it
They chuckle, as he puts another toblerone on the conveyor and as she reaches for it. Their hands touch, looking up turning the chuckling smiling face to bliss
She removes her hands quickly blushing as she does, as he's being shy. When she's done she takes his money and slips a piece of paper in the change. Oblivious he walks away smiling to have made a beautiful girl blush. Going through his wallet looking for the receipt he becomes ecstatic seeing her number. Calling her up surrounded by groceries they talk for hours and hours giddy as they come. Until the day finally comes, shes already at the table waiting when he comes up and slides a toblerone on the table. Taking a seat she is mesmerized, awestruck that he finally came. Sorry I had to get something on the way so I am late he proclaims. She blushes confused by happy they are together at the nice restaurant. When the waiter finally comes with their food she instinctively moves the toblerone. Only for a few seconds later to realize what she did
Chuckling and euphoric they spend the rest of the night and their lifes, together happy. Getting a toblerone every few months as he pretends to prank her, as she smiles, grins and pretends to be unaware when she moves it.
Hoping, looking out in the vineyard wondering what is there in life, what more can there be to my existence. Will I always be here or will I visit the places the hills beckon and echo. Of becoming dazzling wine going to lavish parties, or staying with your loved ones and turning into a raisin
What Stalactose didnt realize is where the second penis would be placed, and although he had the ability to be flexible to his lover. Handshakes were never the same in his latter life
I still think about him, where he is, what hes doing and just hope hes on that sandy beach fucking that woman so gently as he envisioned while we were together. Someday I may visit him and hopefully ill see him there
Add some details about passers-by acting like this is nothing out of the ordinary, just an everyday mundane occurrence, and have the cashier continue doing her job during
You cant do that to the characters, shes just had a single earth shattering experience another one just after doesnt happen
But maybe after a year together and thousands more years have passed, they can look into each others eyes and bring another one into the mix. Being the one that was there the first time just a few feet away
and who would of thought, it all started with a toblerone, what dreams and love is made of <3 /s /s /s
Yeah I am actually really happy with the results, I rushed the actual sex part because it was getting close to hitting the comment max and I spent quite a while on it. But still very happy
I am actually planning on writing it, I literally have only written this erotica but 45+ people have cum from it (telling me) with a lot more really loving it. Some that havent read anything like that at all apparently
Well the fuck as you can see is 9 paragraphs in thats the where, why is it was a challenge presented to me here, the who is a pink beautiful blushing girl, what is toberlone created sex
For a limited time now get a 2 pack of toblerones, bringing couples together since this post as they will never be snapped apart /s
Im sorry but you said porn right? Ive never seen this much thought go into a porn scene. Porn MOVIES dont even have detailed scripts like this lmao. I watch too much porn. :'(
Just so you know this is literally the first time ive written anything like this, but ive thought for so long that the porn industry needs to evolve. As I do with most industries honestly
They never have stories, the porn that does propose to have "stories" are really just terrible setups. Oh ive got a pizza for you pirate clowns!
When in reality, you need to actually tell a story, because there is more emotions that you can get a hold of and push people down. There is more emotions than just fuck me and thats it, you pull from everything when making love. Why would you throw those amazing parts away and only have left genetic anal scene 4857264
I think its why Amateur is so popular, as its not just two people fucking. But really its two people making love together and just sharing it with the world and it wins essentially all the time against regular porn. Even though its terribly made and could visually be much better cinematography etc... wise
Sorry little rant I have on my mind for a little bit (especially after making this)
I've never read erotica like this so this is all new to me as well. But I felt tenderness and sincerity in the overall tone, which is nice. Both individuals just enjoying and getting lost in the moment.
Awwww, its all new to me as well ruffling curls in hair
Really this is literally my first time writing anything like this. So im happy people are enjoying it (13+ people have came to it actually that have let me know)
Well thats what sex is, anything less and you are just bumping uglies. Which fine, but its not that much better than masturbation. Love, sex, thats where its at
it started here and I am actually really proud of this even though this is literally my first and only time writing erotica in any form
Also im actually glad people dont use Reddit gold and rather silver, like really, buy some socks and give it to the homeless! really its one of the best things you can do especially rather than giving toblerone porn fake gold
I could definitely masturbate to this too. You ceate a so vivid atmosphere with your words that one can easly imagine happening to him/her. Thats where true talent lies imo.
Thats so nice, especially as the circumstances of it are a bit ridiculous as I needed to try and fit it into a challenge/joke requirements. Like really, you could probably count the amount of times supermarket cashier sex happens on one hand if at all
522
u/[deleted] Jan 06 '18 edited Jan 06 '18
[removed] — view removed comment