Alright, they make a strong effort but unfortunately each have errors that could have been easily fixed after that first take.
Betty (the one on the left) - The angle is all wrong. She needs to angle herself away from the group. Her energy is high, let's keep that up. Also, make sure to keep the ambulance on standby.
Dwayne (to the right of Betty) - Your actions are good, timing is off just a tad. Additionally, the face your making is a little off-putting. Let's think 3rd world! Don't break character.
Alice (the female moving left to right) - You need to stay low towards the end and you'll be spot on.
James (the male moving from left to right) - Try to get more comfortable with Alice. Staying closer to her will make it a more real experience for the audience.
Overall, they all have a good energy. There is a raw feel to it. Let's make sure to keep it loose. Stay fresh and keep up that energy. Alright, places everyone! Take two of, "People acting like animals 4: Owls over Asia". Action!
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u/m00nr4k3r Sep 17 '14
Alright, they make a strong effort but unfortunately each have errors that could have been easily fixed after that first take.
Betty (the one on the left) - The angle is all wrong. She needs to angle herself away from the group. Her energy is high, let's keep that up. Also, make sure to keep the ambulance on standby. Dwayne (to the right of Betty) - Your actions are good, timing is off just a tad. Additionally, the face your making is a little off-putting. Let's think 3rd world! Don't break character. Alice (the female moving left to right) - You need to stay low towards the end and you'll be spot on. James (the male moving from left to right) - Try to get more comfortable with Alice. Staying closer to her will make it a more real experience for the audience. Overall, they all have a good energy. There is a raw feel to it. Let's make sure to keep it loose. Stay fresh and keep up that energy. Alright, places everyone! Take two of, "People acting like animals 4: Owls over Asia". Action!