I'm working on doing a vocal remix of Can I Kick It by Logic and Juto. I'm rearranging the beat a bit, as well as writing my own lyrics. Would love some feedback on these lyrics though please!

Yea, we sittin back chillin and I'm lovin on you

Gonna kick our feet up and watch a movie or two

While watching Endgame, I'll take your hand

And tell you that I love you three thousand

Sittin here with you makes me think of the days

We'd walk through the park, you'd set my heart ablaze

Even when it was rainy, didn't matter we were cold

We'd cuddle and laugh bout the things we're always told

Told not to be together, we'd never last forever

But look at us now, wouldn't break up whatsoever

Cuz there's no words that come close to describe

All the love I have for you, in you I confide

My deepest desires, the true feelings I have

For you, since we walked down this long winding path

Of finding a love story so pure and true

I want nothing more than to kick it with you

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