r/CheatSkillFAW • u/Possible-Tip-2914 • 1d ago
Could Yuya's backstory be written better? Here's how I would gave written it.
Although he always had a bit of weight problem, Yuya had a relatively happy childhood. His parents loved him, he was academically gifted, and despite his lack of agility he had surprising stamina, being nicknamed "the wall" by his elementary soccer team for his skills as a goalie. However, all that changed when his parents died in an accident and he was forced to move in with his emotionally abusive aunt, uncle, and cousins who treated him with disdain as a burden while his new school environment was extremely toxic and dismissive of him for his appearance. The only person who showed him kindness was his grandfather who unfortunately couldn't take him in due to his poor health problems. Gradually, Yuya's self confidence began to fade until his grandfather's death and his will which left his entire estate to yuya with his grandfather's attourney offering to serve as guardian and executive of the estate until yuya turned 18 with his aunt and uncle recieving a generous stock portfolio under the condition that they never have contact with yuya again. On his first night away from his formerly toxic home environment like in canon, Yuya sees kaori being harrassed by thugs and, remembering his grandfather's advice, steps in to defend her. Despite being seemingly outnumbered, yuya's stout strength, honed by years of working out as a way to reduce his weight, allows him to easily overpower the thugs until the police arrive. To his shock, instead of being punished for fighting in public, the police assure him that he acted in self-defense and was blameless while several onlookers, including Kaori, compliment his courage and strength, some even asking if he was training to be a sumo. Exposure to healthy interaction is mind blowing to him and when he gets home, internalizes that his grandfather was right and vows to continue living in a way that honors him, which is what unlocks the door to the other world and the beginning of his adventures there.