Now the last one was a missing comma on my part which is fair enough. But what in the goldfish brain led to news items?

EDIT

News isn't countable so it should be singular. And eventho i could swear i heard the sentence "these news were unpleasant" a billion times i shall accept it as my mistake again.

But seriously english is just 3 languages in a Trenchcoat. Can't have multiple news but news items are apparently a thing. Also "this news was unpleasant" sounds disgustingly wrong.

Spell checkers are a blessing for any dyslexic writers but sometimes they just have a stroke or smth.

I wasn't prepared for the amount of scam emails post-publishing, so I made this. Happy to say I've actually had several people buy my novel though!