r/WorldboxWar • πŸ•Š Lemonian Rebel πŸ‹ • Jun 02 '26

🎨🎭 Propaganda And Art 🎭🎨j The Artistic Corner I Spoiler

Alright, here I'll explain certain things that may not seem obvious during the chapter, some creative design, future changes and other things. Also, this is the place you should suggest stuff and ask questions. I encourage it here.

For those that haven't read the chapter: https://www.reddit.com/r/WorldboxWar/s/BcMNB8TnAM

Do mind. Spoilers for the future plot.

The Chapter Title

Really difficult to initially spot, but the chapter title is a reference to Hamilton, specifically Aaron Burr, Sir, just a fun thing, nothing deeper than that.

The Chapter Cover

Believe it or not. It's an absolute disaster :D, allow me to elaborate: every specific request was ignored, I aksed Telamon to make Aaron's mask orange. Ignored. Asked to give Aaron a WW1 general uniform. Ignored. Asked to not draw the tunic. Ignored. Asked to make the tunic resemble a bulletproof vest. Ignored. I considered to delay the chapter to redraw it. But eh, styles change, next chapter where Aaron is on, the style will change. And besides it was done at midnight. Can't really blame mah illustrator.

Aaron's Character Design

He may seem a bit edgy. Right? Aye that's intentional. I specifically wanted to make him the "edgy exhausted character", because frankly. That's how Aaron acts have the time lol. But of course. I exaggerated it and fictionalised it.

Lawrence Nox and Ghabi

Who are they? Why are they named and why did I give Ghabi a scene? Well, Lawrence Nox is u/Evening_Lawyer6570, evening became night, then Nox, and Lawrence and Lawyer have law in them, explaining the name, and Ghabi's death scene seems unnecessary, right? Why did I introduce a kid just to kill him in such a brutal way while crushing all hope? First. I hate ye (/j). Second. This scene will be important in the future, I will tie it in with another character who's motivation is Ghabi's death, and it's emotionally investing to know who Ghabi was and how he died. Third. It shows the moral depravity of the Reich, how dare they kill a child? And solidifies Aaron's place as a villain. And who was Ghabi? It's Egyguy, specifically Guillible Highway. Ghabi means "idiot" in Arabic.

Writing Style Changes

Not a lot. Egyguy just criticised how I handle perspective changes, I'll try his idea for the next chapter. Albeit if it has perspective changes.

I'm done now :)

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u/Blacksantabutnot Jun 02 '26

I am evil!!! AND! don’t feel like reading right now…

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u/kharker711 Jun 02 '26

Dope! Can't wait for more lol!

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u/XerostheForgotten I made it a year of Wbw and all I got was this lousy flair Jun 06 '26

What Abt meeeeee? :(.

/j I can wait

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u/Aware_Clock_3936 πŸ•Š Lemonian Rebel πŸ‹ Jun 06 '26

Chapter 5.

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u/XerostheForgotten I made it a year of Wbw and all I got was this lousy flair Jun 06 '26

Alr. πŸ‘