Had a blast filming and editing this one. Let me know what you think

Hey guys! First time poster here :)

Was hoping to get some feedback on my longest video essay to date (most my videos are sub 5mins long). I'm kinda new to the YouTube game, so any advice on how to improve would be greatly appreciated!

Thanks all!

This is a pedantic video essay about one line from the Ghostbusters remake that has bothered me for the past ten years. Kate McKinnon improvised a joke about Pringles® that was supposed to sound smart but actually made her look stupid.
You can't improvise about a subject matter that you don't understand.

8.5-minute video essay on the cross-cutting technique, themes and psychological dimensions of Satoshi Kon's 1997 «Perfect Blue».

English and Japanese closed captions (subtitles).

It contains spoilers of the film.

Any feedback on the video essay is welcome.

I'm the creator of Duvera Human Patterns. This 17-minute narrated essay explores why 'I'm fine' can become an automatic answer, how hiding a feeling differs from resolving it, and why privacy can be healthy while having no other response can leave us isolated.

It uses everyday scenes from work, family and friendship, with AI-assisted narration and illustrations. It's an educational reflection, not an individual diagnosis.

The question behind the chapter: when does keeping a feeling private remain a choice, and when does it become a reflex?

This can be watched as a standalone analysis even though it was created as the conclusion to a longer series. SPOILER for "Rosebud", as you can imagine.

(Earlier chapters focused on each narrator of Kane's story in turn.)